You think you are knowing me
but what is it you truely see -
what I am trying to scream,
or what you want to believe.
Every line opens a broken scar,
further from who we really are,
leaving just a fallen shell
of all we'll never tell.
This hidden me is yours alone now,
every smile, every frown.
These lines are my sacred vow,
that's why I have to get them out.
05/01/09
* Be careful what you wish for.....
I'm with Fay! The turnaround in those two lines is brilliant! Tony
A favourite phrase for me is 'the hidden me is yours alone now' - - this committment is so honestly penned - - ah I shall remember that - - - a lovely piece in all.........10 from Fay.
Every line indeed, and yours convey so very much...I'm with Kevin Wells, 'who' is a lucky devil.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
These lines are my sacred vow, that's why I have to get them out. musical and mystical....... still devoted to your pen aroha r