SALINI NAIR

Bronze Star - 6,292 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Eternal..Love…


A golden sheaf that she knead
In silence talk to dreams
Solitude that lift her
The dreams that take to heights

There she flew inside dreams
On the way there spot two eyes
There could feel the deepness of hope
On that shore she hugs that dream

Miles that passed and love all way
Breeze quote can one love like this
Shore grieve; even sea don’t cares me like this
All way jealousy that garland

Even she whisper on the deepness of her love
But the eyes never notice its warmth
On another shore he frame his love
Yet she hugs her love as her breathe

The love still flow to that side
On a huge ship that wave reaches his shore
Some way the breeze told him about her love
The lament love started to the shore

On voyage that passes all hazards
An iceberg that jealous to her love
Hit the side and sink to deep
Silently

On another shore
Still on her dreams she loves him
Days pass and one day on that lonely shore
Eternal ship wharfs and; fetched his love! ! !


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Submitted: Saturday, May 10, 2014

Topic of this poem: love lost

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  • Freshman - 1,235 Points Tajudeen Shah (5/11/2014 5:08:00 AM)

    As ever, Love wins over the gusts and thunderous confusions of life, in legends and in real. Storms are meant to add strength to the ambiance of love. Obstacles often help to measure the worth and depth of every human passions. unbounded are hinderance and confusion sin real life these days, and in love it is noted much with more care as love itself reigns over all the passions of the mortals, whose absolute aim is to become immortal by means of the worth and devotion submitted to love. Your versification, purely in my opinion, would have been still better with the mechanics of compositions duly concerned. Sweetly penned and enjoyable read. God Bless. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,246 Points Valsa George (5/11/2014 1:07:00 AM)

    Even if icebergs hit the ship of love, it can survive the shock and true love cannot be drowned.... A great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,478 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/10/2014 9:52:00 AM)

    An iceberg that jealous on her love hit the side and sink in deep....The end of love is in sorrowness and poet beautifully carved a very nice poem of love in beautiful words which have the fragrance of feeling no doubt. (Report) Reply

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