Eerie calm melts and diffuse
Words linger in misty evening
Smiles break in queer rings
Whispers grow intense
Like a swan’s cry
On the river at a pitch dark
Midsummer night
Shadows stir in haze
And atmosphere rings
With deep growing silence
As a hundred swans splash
On water fluttering their wings
Breaking waves in many circlets
Feelings grow in the rhythm of gentle ripples
Concentric circles round one point
Growing, breaking in an unending cycle.
Many deep and true feeling expressed here. A lovely write Jasmeen.
Silence giving way to meaningful sounds and feelings swelling for utterance! Beautiful images Jasmeen! I see a hundred swans splashing, fluttering their wings! !
Eerie Calm by Jasmeen Khan is a coherent poem head to toe word by word arranged very calm
To look swans, fluttering their wings in water, splashing of water made by swan, intense silence, misty evening...wao am still in imagination, a perfect poem to be read as well enjoyed & read again & again over time
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Feelings grow in... gentle ripples. Thank you for the nice image.