Jahan zaib

Rookie - 70 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Do I live in your heart or you live in mine?


Do I live in your heart or you live in mine?
I don’t know I just don’t know
From far off places I feel I hear
Warmth of breath, your eyes’ shine

You come, when I sleep, take me with you,
From the land of all to the land of none
Valley of my dreams, island of your thoughts
Hands in hands, we walk together through

I need not to travel, or walk or fly
To be with you, to see you smile
No distance too long, no fence too strong
I then find you, and we fly high

Immortal the tie we on moon nine
I live in your heart you live in mine.

Jahanzeb 02/11/2013

Submitted: Saturday, November 02, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 2,037 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/12/2013 11:40:00 PM)

    Such a fab poetic sentimental poem. On cloud nine, wow to say moon nine, innovative idea! Dont forget to review my latest pleez. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,724 Points Heather Wilkins (11/18/2013 7:47:00 PM)

    do I live in your heart or you in mine. an interesting question you live in each other. lovely thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/14/2013 1:27:00 PM)

    Prayer is not asking. It is a longing of the soul. It is daily admission of one's weakness. It is better in prayer to have a heart without words than words without a heart.
    sometimes i feel like i'm surrounded by magicians..cause your words are magic sir..standing ovation to you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (11/13/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    Immortal the tie we on moon nine
    I live in your heart you live in mine, , ,
    loved these lines, , , , , , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (11/2/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    The title remind one of my earliest poem called- In your heart my love reside- The romantic sounds fill the air sir, ! _SOul (Report) Reply

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