Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Dimples Do Deceive - Poem by Jahan zaib

They too, hold a bit,
Who smilingly sit,
Few drops of tears in eyes.

Comments about Dimples Do Deceive by Jahan zaib

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    the outside is just a façade. deep within lies the person of value. nice write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (4/17/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    hahah who's dimple decieves you zaib, i know very well about it, , as far as poem is concern...its well written & beautiful composed haiku by you....outward appearance is often deceptive, this message is beautifully clarify in your poem...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (11/30/2012 4:01:00 AM)

    wow, , that was so powerful, , , well written, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,667 Points Unwritten Soul (11/27/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    With pure heart and what you hold is to give
    sure make a deceiving smile easily broken
    as sincerity is the cure of all behavior, sweet and honest
    Beauty in faces easy to see, beauty in heart only mind and soul can perceive_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,378 Points * Sunprincess * (11/27/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    yes i agree, looks can be deceiving, so we should
    look with our heart also..fabulous write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 27, 2012

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