Jahan zaib

Rookie - 82 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Dream Me - Poem by Jahan zaib

Can all your smiles be only mine?
The moonlike face can on me shine?
Can I be the breath of life yours
Dream me, dear lady; I wanna be your dream

If I sleep soon, you change your sides
Restless in the heart, angry like the tides
Can I be the joy in all tough times?
Dream me, dear lady; I wanna be your dream

Early in the morning the sun in the window
Sends his rays on you and your afro
Lay you, hand yours, on chest mine
Dream me, dear lady; I wanna be your dream

Can all your waves be only mine?
When I leave to work leaving hand thine
Wave hand and smile, come soon say the eyes
Dream me, dear lady; I wanna be your dream

Can all your waits be only for me?
On all my returns can you there be?
Then hold my hand and make me some tea
Dream me, dear lady; I wanna be your dream


Comments about Dream Me by Jahan zaib

  • Gold Star - 9,874 Points Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 1:35:00 PM)

    when you write to a dear lady as such, I am sure you will be her dream. touching write (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,359 Points Valsa George (1/18/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    This is such a passionate expression of love! Is it just an infatuation or a stable longing for a permanent bond? Let Jahan remain in her dreams as a never dying inspiration! Wish you all the best! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (1/16/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    with such a nice writing talent i am pretty sure not only when she sleeps , , , but even when she is awake, , she dreams of you, , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (1/15/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    so beautiful...i am lost for words sir you are a fantastic writer.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,686 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/14/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    it is so nice to read someone write like this! certain lines are too familiar! 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (1/13/2013 7:18:00 PM)

    wow this is fantastic! ..and if you keep on writing like this..
    you may put an enchantment on someone and they may
    dream you...a most fabulous write! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,953 Points Sallam Yassin (1/13/2013 12:44:00 PM)

    I am sure that will be really a good dream
    great and sweet
    love dream (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (1/13/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Better reality than a dream_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,032 Points Gajanan Mishra (1/13/2013 9:49:00 AM)

    Dream me dear lady. Very good one. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 13, 2013



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