naida supnet

Veteran Poet - 1,531 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Did You-I Did - Poem by naida supnet

Did you ever try to shout
To the top of your lungs
Till you run out of breath
The tears show your fears?
I did.
Did you ever run
Till your lungs burn
And your legs ache
Cause your dreams break?
I did.
Because I'm sad
Because I'm broken
And I am mad
My pain unspoken.
I just cried, cried hard
Till my tears ran out
Sat flat, unmoved
And the pain got out.
Did you?
I did.

Comments about Did You-I Did by naida supnet

  • Gold Star - 10,448 Points Amitava Sur (7/4/2015 12:32:00 AM)

    An outburst of accumulated pains and strife, very poignant but truthful expression (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (10/28/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Clever write....doing things that is extra human to let go of the pain is remarkable...we have to do it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jono Casuyon (7/28/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    I love it, well said. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lalkrishna Varavoor (11/13/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    indeed i did. well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandora - (10/4/2011 5:02:00 AM)

    Yeah. That. Well said. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie CB Carlos (9/22/2011 6:34:00 AM)

    I wish I could. I wish I DID. wow. I like this poem! :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 548 Points Ency Bearis (8/31/2011 7:33:00 AM)

    Impressive and interesting verses (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Troy (8/13/2011 12:31:00 AM)

    Take it to the limit one more time (The Eagles) ..........I did.......Great one....I love it...

    Jim Troy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (6/20/2011 6:01:00 PM)

    live hard... or dont bother! like this one a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bernadette Inocencio (3/26/2011 2:08:00 AM)

    just like the old times huh.....i got it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Scarborough Gypsy (3/4/2011 6:42:00 PM)

    Fantastic flow and rythm throughout all except the first stansa, which just didn't do it for me. I love the concept though and the feeling you have put into it.

    Kind Regards
    Gyp's (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leas Celyn (3/4/2011 9:11:00 AM)

    this poem makes me imagine myself doing just that. this is a beautiful poem, really. +10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (2/24/2011 3:06:00 PM)

    Interesting concept you have. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Petrashishina (2/8/2011 1:37:00 AM)

    I did. These moments make us stronger. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 278 Points Pacific Hernandez (2/7/2011 1:07:00 PM)

    A very nice way of expressing one's feeling thru a poem. Beautiful. Short but overflowing in thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (12/11/2010 8:23:00 AM)

    Salute the stress......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (11/19/2010 4:01:00 PM)

    this is really heartfelt.
    it is lovely piece
    well penned for real (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (11/13/2010 5:16:00 AM)

    I like the way this poem speaks to the reader and the sense of sympathy and empathy the reader can feel. Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (11/12/2010 6:12:00 PM)

    We have all felt that way. That is why we write poetry. We cannot speak our pain with our human voice. ---Greenwolfe 1962 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Matt Mooney (11/11/2010 4:15:00 PM)

    Looks like you roared from the sky and crash landed! Or maybe you took off and landed safely, having burnt out all the bad fuel in your system as you flew. One way or another you wrote a poem that helps us all to appreciate the feeling of wanting to freak out and blow our top when life gets too hot to handle! Bon courage.10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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