naida supnet

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Did You-I Did - Poem by naida supnet

Did you ever try to shout
To the top of your lungs
Till you run out of breath
The tears show your fears?
I did.
Did you ever run
Till your lungs burn
And your legs ache
Cause your dreams break?
I did.
Because I'm sad
Because I'm broken
And I am mad
My pain unspoken.
I just cried, cried hard
Till my tears ran out
Sat flat, unmoved
And the pain got out.
Did you?
I did.

Comments about Did You-I Did by naida supnet

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (8/30/2015 8:25:00 AM)

    Did you ever try to shout
    To the top of your lungs
    Did you ever run Cause your dreams break?
    I just cried, cried hard
    Till my tears ran out
    Sat flat, unmoved
    And the pain got out.
    Did you?
    I did.
    with what a conviction and certainty you say i did, i did, i did. such a woman poetess i see rarely. thank you for this greatness in character. God bless you (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (7/4/2015 12:32:00 AM)

    An outburst of accumulated pains and strife, very poignant but truthful expression (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (10/28/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Clever write....doing things that is extra human to let go of the pain is remarkable...we have to do it! (Report) Reply

  • Jono Casuyon (7/28/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    I love it, well said. :) (Report) Reply

  • Lalkrishna Varavoor (11/13/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    indeed i did. well done. (Report) Reply

  • Pandora - (10/4/2011 5:02:00 AM)

    Yeah. That. Well said. (Report) Reply

  • CB Carlos (9/22/2011 6:34:00 AM)

    I wish I could. I wish I DID. wow. I like this poem! :) (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (8/31/2011 7:33:00 AM)

    Impressive and interesting verses (Report) Reply

  • Jim Troy (8/13/2011 12:31:00 AM)

    Take it to the limit one more time (The Eagles) ..........I did.......Great one....I love it...

    Jim Troy (Report) Reply

  • Eric Cockrell (6/20/2011 6:01:00 PM)

    live hard... or dont bother! like this one a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Bernadette Inocencio (3/26/2011 2:08:00 AM)

    just like the old times huh.....i got it... (Report) Reply

  • Scarborough Gypsy (3/4/2011 6:42:00 PM)

    Fantastic flow and rythm throughout all except the first stansa, which just didn't do it for me. I love the concept though and the feeling you have put into it.

    Kind Regards
    Gyp's (Report) Reply

  • Leas Celyn (3/4/2011 9:11:00 AM)

    this poem makes me imagine myself doing just that. this is a beautiful poem, really. +10 (Report) Reply

  • Aldo Kraas (2/24/2011 3:06:00 PM)

    Interesting concept you have. (Report) Reply

  • Anna Petrashishina (2/8/2011 1:37:00 AM)

    I did. These moments make us stronger. (Report) Reply

  • Pacific Hernandez (2/7/2011 1:07:00 PM)

    A very nice way of expressing one's feeling thru a poem. Beautiful. Short but overflowing in thought. (Report) Reply

  • Vinod Kumar (12/11/2010 8:23:00 AM)

    Salute the stress......10 (Report) Reply

  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (11/19/2010 4:01:00 PM)

    this is really heartfelt.
    it is lovely piece
    well penned for real (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile Louis Cecile (11/13/2010 5:16:00 AM)

    I like the way this poem speaks to the reader and the sense of sympathy and empathy the reader can feel. Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (11/12/2010 6:12:00 PM)

    We have all felt that way. That is why we write poetry. We cannot speak our pain with our human voice. ---Greenwolfe 1962 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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