Ah...Women Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Ah...Women

Rating: 4.9


I thought of EvE, when ADAM trusted her
They were both banished, became so unpure
But they have made it, and mankind began
You and me here we are, we owe them one.

I remember HELEN, and why she ran away
Because of her beauty, cities became astray
But who would ever doubt, a maiden so inlove
She would do it again, for the man that she loves.

Also there's Diana, the only England's rose
With her beauty and charm, instantly we froze
As she walks with her grace, her worries are kept
Then she went all at once, the whole world wept.

And who would forget, CLEOPATRA so great
With her brains and her beauty, men pile at her gate
She can charm anyone, who attempts to be near
But be ready for the pain and the hurt, do you hear.

Hey, there's HERA, the sole Olympus Queen
She will hinder anyone, who comes in between
Her eyes, her intuition, she believes all her life
A true picture of wife... the always jealous wife.

Ah women, Some are EVE, some are DIANA
CLEOPATRA, HELEN, or the goddess HERA
Whoever we are, whoever we may be
Let us do what we're called for, we are WOMEN and all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ah, women, good piece, although some may not be a thing of beauty as they age.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 30 July 2013

wow, this is brilliant i love the way you interpret the women in various forms although I am a little disappointed because you prefer to choose Hera rather than Athena : p but after all, this is a great poem thanks for sharing

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 30 July 2013

@Adheez Van Der Beanthz- I thank you for sparing time for my poem. I love Athena too, but when I was writing this piece I thought of Hera who will represent a wife who is always jealous, funny though, but maybe I will find time to write about the strong and brainy Athena SOON. Again, thank you.

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Poetheart Morgan 01 August 2013

I like your accuracy in words, a new vision. Very very good. We have to remember that. We are just women coming back to our history

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2013

You have written in praise of women's beauty and talent. Some for men too, perhaps? ? ?

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 February 2022

i loved it especially the stanza about diana, princess of wales

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Marvin Brato 06 December 2017

Beautifully penned this poem about women... that is why I love them!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2016

Women! ! Thanks for sharing this poem on women with us.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 22 January 2016

wonderful poem sister. Siya_! !

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 June 2015

I love this Naide! so nice to read.

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bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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