naida supnet

Bronze Star - 2,275 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Do Not Try - Poem by naida supnet

Just in case you have not noticed I try hard not to get pissed
I've been nice all this time Kept my poise kept my calm

But if you won't stop bugging If you won't stop annoying
I will let go of my reigns And you'll know what it means

My anger oh my temper I can't control I remember
So better start being nice Is that not being wise?

My patience has improved My pride has been toned
You won't rule over my mood Most of the time I feel good.


Comments about Do Not Try by naida supnet

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (12/22/2015 8:02:00 AM)

    My patience has improved My pride has been toned
    You won't rule over my mood Most of the time I feel good. You are portraying a reality in human relationship. thank you very much. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Mac Adrone Adonay Mac Adrone Adonay (11/25/2013 2:38:00 AM)

    nice blend of internal rhyme, .. just remember, patience is a treasure. Hello po.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (10/20/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    My God! Full of fury!
    I agree with Poetheart Morgan. :) (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (8/19/2013 8:05:00 PM)

    from time to time our patience get tried. just don't push the lady too far. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello Cynthia Buhain-baello (8/12/2013 10:17:00 PM)

    Direct and cuttingly strong. Go girl! (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (8/6/2013 5:36:00 PM)

    Good original write or raw emotions an anger. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (8/2/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Hey don't let go of your reigns, you will regret it. Hang in there (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan Poetheart Morgan (8/1/2013 1:44:00 PM)

    I think someone is in trouble here! ! ! ! Very well done Poetess. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood David Wood (7/30/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    Somebody is trying your patients, but being patient is a virtue. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 26, 2012



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