Do Not Try Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Do Not Try

Rating: 4.3


Just in case you have not noticed I try hard not to get pissed
I've been nice all this time Kept my poise kept my calm

But if you won't stop bugging If you won't stop annoying
I will let go of my reigns And you'll know what it means

My anger oh my temper I can't control I remember
So better start being nice Is that not being wise?

My patience has improved My pride has been toned
You won't rule over my mood Most of the time I feel good.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 01 August 2013

I think someone is in trouble here! ! ! ! Very well done Poetess.

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Lyn Paul 02 August 2013

Hey don't let go of your reigns, you will regret it. Hang in there

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Danny Draper 06 August 2013

Good original write or raw emotions an anger.

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David Wood 30 July 2013

Somebody is trying your patients, but being patient is a virtue.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2015

My patience has improved My pride has been toned You won't rule over my mood Most of the time I feel good. You are portraying a reality in human relationship. thank you very much. tony

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Mac Adrone Adonay 25 November 2013

nice blend of internal rhyme, .. just remember, patience is a treasure. Hello po.. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2013

My God! Full of fury! I agree with Poetheart Morgan. :)

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

from time to time our patience get tried. just don't push the lady too far. nice write

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 12 August 2013

Direct and cuttingly strong. Go girl!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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