Darkness Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Darkness

Rating: 4.9


Darkness is a quiet friend
That embraces me so tight
When doubts I cannot end
It helps me feel alright

Darkness is a faithful ally
That backs up willingly
Until all worries fly
It serves unendingly

Darkness is a brave comrade
That helps me hide the pain
Though I am hurt and sad
I feel so brave again

Though I'm so crippled
Though I'm very broken
Though I'm ever down
And very very torn

Why worry, why cry
Let all the problems fly
No need to feel so shy
With darkness I'll get by

Darkness is a quiet friend
Darkness is a faithfull ally
Darkness is a brave comrade
My friend with you I'm glad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 18 June 2011

in darkness we find the peace beyond ourselves... love it!

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Rafiq Sandeelvi 03 July 2011

Night is a part of our mind and soul, I also like darkness because I feel peace and harmony in its domain and it can expose me better than day light.you have captured the power of darkness and named it comrade, your faithful ally who helps to remove your hidden pain....in the symbolic way your darkness reaches till ultimate darkness..nice poem with touching atmosphere.... kindly read my all poems and leave your analytic remarks in detail.

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 July 2011

if you take it positively darkness is a friend of ours as we get all the peace there.nice ink.

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Jim Troy 10 August 2011

Naida, you bring forward an aspect of darkness that I never did give credit to. Your descriptive words of faithful, brave, quiet friend. A wonderful tribute to a part of our lives that gets a bad rap most of the time.. I love the bold way you bring it forward.......... Thanks for the lesson......... Very good .................. Jim Troy

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i love your poem its very good i loved it a lot i some times fill like the drakness is the only one that knows my pain and me but i loved your poem

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Marvin Brato 06 November 2013

Darkness is a camouflage to cover innate thoughts and feelings.... it assimilate sentiments which actually lighten up the burden!

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

many emotions can be hid in the darkness. Its the light of day that gets us sometimes. good write

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Mohabeer Beeharry 25 August 2013

This poem is so full of messages. Darkness or forced loneliness may not be a cure. But they give you time to rejuvenate, a certain chance to reassess. I like the writing. Well done. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Arabella Picken 10 August 2013

This is Brilliant. Love it

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Deepak Sawhney 04 August 2013

Very beautifully expressed.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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