naida supnet

Veteran Poet - 1,655 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

The Same Moon - Poem by naida supnet

As I stare at the moon above
Can't help but to feel sad
That I am admiring it alone
Admiring the beautiful moon.

But though he is far and away
A thought made me okay
He's staring at the same moon
And he will be home soon.


Comments about The Same Moon by naida supnet

  • Bronze Star - 2,171 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (8/26/2015 6:19:00 AM)

    and he will be home soon.. full of the feeling of waiting in love. who is this lucky man..? thank you for sharing your inner feelings. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,772 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/10/2014 10:33:00 PM)

    I think lovers all over the world do this. Look at the moon or a bright, distant star and think of their loved ones. If the separation is for long, they long for their quick return. They spread the glowing moonlight on their bodies and feel a warm embrace of their beloved.
    Wonderful! 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Luna Tsuki (8/16/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, I like the second part. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Cristina Teodor (11/29/2011 6:21:00 AM)

    Romantic, deep and touching verses. I'll always be a moon admirer..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/30/2011 5:37:00 PM)

    Parapsychology with the moon.Sometimes i wish it happens what yu wish.If it does not though people will call you a lunatic, i will still call you a poet (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (7/26/2011 5:59:00 AM)

    Universal objects always give solace. Great philosophy of life is reflecting in these humble lines. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,456 Points Hans Vr (7/25/2011 6:53:00 PM)

    This poem really touches, very moving. The love for the moon and the warm feeling you get by the fact that he is looking at the same moon, followed by this very nice forward looking message. Fantastic. It makes the reader feel good. That is a great, great achievement of a poet. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Petrashishina (2/8/2011 2:04:00 AM)

    you have a very unique way at looking at things...which results in amazing poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Elena Toledo (2/4/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    I really like this one very much, sad but hopeful...is the hearts pang speaking

    Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Vergara (1/30/2011 11:28:00 PM)

    wonderful and hopeful... i got the same moon..lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (1/26/2011 6:20:00 PM)

    Lovely hope and lovely wish. Deep faith in your heart makes this poem so calm and beautiful.

    Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Inner Whispers (11/14/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    short verses but relays deep longing. Nice write, Nadia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Manoz Shrestha (11/9/2010 10:33:00 PM)

    ..as the white moon... the poem too illuminates itself with the feeling of solace and longing.. nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Courtney Steele (11/5/2010 10:29:00 PM)

    I feel like this often this is cute. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Megan Dickson (11/4/2010 5:05:00 AM)

    this really sweet! love sure can inspire.great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Courtney Shanahan (11/1/2010 10:28:00 PM)

    Awwwww.... Really sweet poem Naida. It is really cute.9/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Carney (11/1/2010 12:05:00 AM)

    Very nicely written, short but you tell it all. It's so strange how we can find solace in the moon. Such a comforting effect. I love how even you are seperated you can look at the same moon and have that great bond. Nicely put. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,426 Points Ken E Hall (10/31/2010 6:22:00 PM)

    Thats when you are looking at a blue moon until he returns..nice one..regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/30/2010 2:07:00 PM)

    I n’ he sharing same Moon but different result soft poem… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Naida
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Star Crossed Lady (10/27/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    i loved it. mother moon is always there. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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