Treasure Island

naida supnet

(bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

The Same Moon


As I stare at the moon above
Can't help but to feel sad
That I am admiring it alone
Admiring the beautiful moon.

But though he is far and away
A thought made me okay
He's staring at the same moon
And he will be home soon.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Edited: Saturday, May 07, 2011

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  • Khairul Ahsan (1/10/2014 10:33:00 PM)

    I think lovers all over the world do this. Look at the moon or a bright, distant star and think of their loved ones. If the separation is for long, they long for their quick return. They spread the glowing moonlight on their bodies and feel a warm embrace of their beloved.
    Wonderful! 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (8/30/2011 5:37:00 PM)

    Parapsychology with the moon.Sometimes i wish it happens what yu wish.If it does not though people will call you a lunatic, i will still call you a poet (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (7/26/2011 5:59:00 AM)

    Universal objects always give solace. Great philosophy of life is reflecting in these humble lines. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (7/25/2011 6:53:00 PM)

    This poem really touches, very moving. The love for the moon and the warm feeling you get by the fact that he is looking at the same moon, followed by this very nice forward looking message. Fantastic. It makes the reader feel good. That is a great, great achievement of a poet. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Toledo (2/4/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    I really like this one very much, sad but hopeful...is the hearts pang speaking

    Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (1/26/2011 6:20:00 PM)

    Lovely hope and lovely wish. Deep faith in your heart makes this poem so calm and beautiful.

    Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Manoz Shrestha (11/9/2010 10:33:00 PM)

    ..as the white moon... the poem too illuminates itself with the feeling of solace and longing.. nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Carney (11/1/2010 12:05:00 AM)

    Very nicely written, short but you tell it all. It's so strange how we can find solace in the moon. Such a comforting effect. I love how even you are seperated you can look at the same moon and have that great bond. Nicely put. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (10/31/2010 6:22:00 PM)

    Thats when you are looking at a blue moon until he returns..nice one..regards (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/30/2010 2:07:00 PM)

    I n’ he sharing same Moon but different result soft poem… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Naida
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rinki Nandy (10/24/2010 5:19:00 AM)

    Thats so real. I sometimes wonder how thoughtfully God created universe. The realization of sharing the view of the moon, the stars, on the same planet shortens the distances among ppl, could be due to miles, races, religion or just the status. (Report) Reply

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