Treasure Island

naida supnet

(bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Friend Rain


When you can't hold back the tears
From streaming down your face
The rain comes to the rescue
Saving you from appearing blue.

From hair down to your cheek
No one will know you're weak
The rain comes to the rescue
Saving you from the public view.

It camouflages and comforts
It helps you hide the pain
If you feel like shouting out
No worries there's the rain.

With every dropp you blink
With every blink you think
That when the rain is done
Your pain is almost gone.

You wipe away the drops
As you wipe away your tears
They'll never know your frown
Rain never brings you down.

You're thankful to the rain
A blessing in disguise
A very helpful cane
To anyone who cries.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Edited: Saturday, May 07, 2011

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  • Binish Cd (1/4/2012 8:52:00 AM)

    a nice combination of human feelings with rain, , , , , really a good work, , , , , , , (Report) Reply

  • Robert Roberts (10/25/2011 10:42:00 AM)

    marvellous writing it brings out the truth behind us hiding behind our fake smiles pretending everything's ok (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (10/10/2011 7:11:00 AM)

    Nice, nice piece...wonderful write..
    makes me ponder the story of rain and my friend..
    my friend and his friend the rain (Report) Reply

  • Richelle Barrameda (8/30/2011 4:14:00 AM)

    From hair down to your cheek
    No one will know you're weak
    The rain comes to the rescue
    Saving you from the public view.

    I like this stanza... this said it all... love this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Cannita Melius (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)

    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • Cannita Melius (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)

    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • Cannita Melius (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)

    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • Cannita Melius (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)

    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • Aqeb Benazir (8/14/2011 5:45:00 AM)

    this poem is filled with substance and cohesiveness. like the aspects it expressed. the first stanza is a nice touch. (Report) Reply

  • Bernadette Inocencio (3/26/2011 2:17:00 AM)

    one of your favorite, if i may say...looking forward for poems talking about, your coffee.noodles.lemon.eggs. you love those things before i just don't know now....just correct me if I'm wrong.. (Report) Reply

  • yellowbell alamanda (11/11/2010 7:37:00 PM)

    I love this poem the way it sound like rain
    memorable as memories poured..
    surely, readers can relate to this when
    they experienced how it feels like being under the rain
    either your crying or dancing...rain is a good element to
    the piece! :) really a friend!

    Ganda! Miss Naida.
    10v. (Report) Reply

  • Bert Bell (11/10/2010 11:42:00 PM)

    Ah, the rain comes to the rescue. What a lovely idea and well-expressed.

    If you feel like shouting out
    No worries there's the rain.

    Beautifully-chosen words and lines to express your original ideas. Very nice indeed.10 (Report) Reply

  • Smoky Hoss (11/4/2010 1:40:00 PM)

    Your poetry is so beautiful, and so full of expression of the heart. You are a wonderful poet, thanks for sharing your soul with us. (Report) Reply

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