Treasure Island

Elena Sandu


Delusions of Grandeur


First page on Poemhunter? !
Made it on the first page
of poemhunter,
is it a blind luck
or way deeper
a serendipity thing?
The day before
have done a rare thing
tried to ease my heart
soul and mind to build a harmony
of me with my surroundings.
Could such way of being
attract or make things
happen?
Who knows?
Would I care?
Would you care?
How would it matter?
First page on Poemhunter?
Should I fall into
Illusion or delusion
of grandeur? !
Lol.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 17, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Delusions of Grandeur by Elena Sandu )

Enter the verification code :

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (10/9/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    by the void of blue heart feels what it is
    deeper you see greater you feel
    when grandeur lays back in between illusion and delusion, thanks dear Elena for sharing, kindly read new of mine (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (9/21/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    How others perceive us is fine and good, but how we perceive ourselves is subject to humility versus ego. As Valsa said, peoe like your work and that is rewarded and is to be appreciated as an honour. Well done but so good of you to be modest and self deprecating, a strength showing genuine character. Well done with is achievement. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/21/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    If many others can come on the first page, why not you Elena? It is no delusion or illusion! You are liked by many! Be happy about it! Enjoyed your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (9/18/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Congratulations! How did you make it? I mean what was the feat?
    Whatever... it's neither illusion, nor delusion of grandeur but perhaps the reality, recognition of the reality. (Report) Reply

Read all 9 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. SHADES OF LOVE, sherif monem
  2. A Shoulder to Weep, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan
  3. Help me I am here, Dustin Hardin
  4. Into your kingdom, hasmukh amathalal
  5. High rise, hasmukh amathalal
  6. Before Death, Ajaeyy Raaj
  7. the toothless Tiger Dynasties, veeraiyah subbulakshmi
  8. The Spray, Akhtar Jawad
  9. Think and breathe, hasmukh amathalal
  10. Love for care, hasmukh amathalal

Poem of the Day

poet Sir Walter Raleigh

EVEN such is Time, that takes in trust
Our youth, our joys, our all we have,
And pays us but with earth and dust;
   Who in the dark and silent grave,
...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. If, Rudyard Kipling
  5. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  8. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  9. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  10. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]