Elena Sandu


Delusions of Grandeur


First page on Poemhunter? !
Made it on the first page
of poemhunter,
is it a blind luck
or way deeper
a serendipity thing?
The day before
have done a rare thing
tried to ease my heart
soul and mind to build a harmony
of me with my surroundings.
Could such way of being
attract or make things
happen?
Who knows?
Would I care?
Would you care?
How would it matter?
First page on Poemhunter?
Should I fall into
Illusion or delusion
of grandeur? !
Lol.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 17, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

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  • Rookie - 166 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (10/9/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    by the void of blue heart feels what it is
    deeper you see greater you feel
    when grandeur lays back in between illusion and delusion, thanks dear Elena for sharing, kindly read new of mine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (10/6/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    A poignant reminder of the actual purpose of writing poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Jr Cuyam (9/29/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    It's fun to read this one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (9/24/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    Learn to appreciate others, and it shall come back to you tenfold! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (9/21/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    How others perceive us is fine and good, but how we perceive ourselves is subject to humility versus ego. As Valsa said, peoe like your work and that is rewarded and is to be appreciated as an honour. Well done but so good of you to be modest and self deprecating, a strength showing genuine character. Well done with is achievement. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (9/21/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    If many others can come on the first page, why not you Elena? It is no delusion or illusion! You are liked by many! Be happy about it! Enjoyed your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 291 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/19/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    Very beautifully penned your anxiety.Proceed with confidence. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/18/2013 7:37:00 AM)

    First page on Poem hunter..Wow. How much excited you would have been! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,927 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/18/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Congratulations! How did you make it? I mean what was the feat?
    Whatever... it's neither illusion, nor delusion of grandeur but perhaps the reality, recognition of the reality. (Report) Reply

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