Delusions Of Grandeur Poem by Elena Sandu

Delusions Of Grandeur

Rating: 4.5


First page on Poemhunter? !
Made it on the first page
of poemhunter,
is it a blind luck
or way deeper
a serendipity thing?
The day before
have done a rare thing
tried to ease my heart
soul and mind to build a harmony
of me with my surroundings.
Could such way of being
attract or make things
happen?
Who knows?
Would I care?
Would you care?
How would it matter?
First page on Poemhunter?
Should I fall into
Illusion or delusion
of grandeur? !
Lol.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 September 2013

Congratulations! How did you make it? I mean what was the feat? Whatever... it's neither illusion, nor delusion of grandeur but perhaps the reality, recognition of the reality.

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 September 2013

First page on Poem hunter..Wow. How much excited you would have been!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 September 2013

Very beautifully penned your anxiety.Proceed with confidence.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 October 2013

by the void of blue heart feels what it is deeper you see greater you feel when grandeur lays back in between illusion and delusion, thanks dear Elena for sharing, kindly read new of mine

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Louis Cecile 06 October 2013

A poignant reminder of the actual purpose of writing poetry.

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Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Learn to appreciate others, and it shall come back to you tenfold!

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Danny Draper 21 September 2013

How others perceive us is fine and good, but how we perceive ourselves is subject to humility versus ego. As Valsa said, peoe like your work and that is rewarded and is to be appreciated as an honour. Well done but so good of you to be modest and self deprecating, a strength showing genuine character. Well done with is achievement.

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Valsa George 21 September 2013

If many others can come on the first page, why not you Elena? It is no delusion or illusion! You are liked by many! Be happy about it! Enjoyed your poem!

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