Death Of Soul Poem by Aftab Alam

Death Of Soul

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When we stop breathing, we are buried,
When soul dies, whole world is worried,
Body is made to decay; its fate is to die,
Soul got eternity; then, why should soul die!

Wednesday, October 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All those who kill the innocent, sick, children, women, and those unarmed or surrendered-whether, individual or a group or organization, a nation or nations -they keep the living body with dead soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alesia Leach 17 October 2014

I like the poem, but maybe the last line should say why should body die since the soul never dies.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 October 2014

I agree with you when a soul forgets the lesson of love it's a living dead soul.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 October 2014

Body dies and soul lives for ever..........well composed

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Lev Brekhman 15 October 2014

A man is dying, a crimson flow, And angel has his soul in tow. Look, think, perceive: The frontier life-to-death is a sieve.

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2014

Soul is immortal. Hence, question of death for soul does not arise. Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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