Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 33 Points (4th feb / Belize)

Dark Soul


A stone cold heartless body,
Decorated by running scars,
The lifeless eyes which stare,
Far ahead, in the anticipation f dark.

What were you thinking?
While you created me
Of ugliness and absurdity,
The world hasn’t seen

If you think I have beauty hidden inside,
You are so wrong,
‘Cause this repulsive exterior hides
The true devil beside,
Devil wicked and strong.

Yeah I am hollow,
Inside me there is a huge hole
Only filled with
Twisted dark soul.

Submitted: Saturday, July 20, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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inspired by the movie'Bram Stoker's Dracula'

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,575 Points Md Asadullah (1/18/2014 1:27:00 PM)

    Your sense of right and wrong is enough proof that you are a bright soul not dark, lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 911 Points Tony Karas (12/1/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Oh man... you touch me on a very deep level with this one.... very deep indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,107 Points Roseann Shawiak (12/1/2013 3:14:00 AM)

    Your poetry is too meaningful to come from someone who is repulsive, you are a blessing to those who read it and can feel your understanding of a subject they also know about, but haven't been able to express like you have. Being hollow can be a good thing, because you can write of anything and everything you want to. It gives you a freedom not everyone can have. You have no boundaries to keep you from going forward in life, and your soul is actually the light of your life, follow it faithfully and you will feel it's freedom. Write from the huge hole - it's actually a well of poetical expression and experience. Thank you for sharing your heart with the world. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohabeer Beeharry (8/30/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    There is a tinge of despair here.
    The hollow inside is not a tragedy.
    That's when the heart and the soul seek to relate
    But you think it is the end of all things. no
    Bring the soul nearer and let the heart be deluged by its light.

    This poem is powerful in itself, because the heart is trying to express itself.
    I love it

    Mohabeer Beeharry (Report) Reply

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