Treasure Island

Lucifera Santez

(4th feb / Belize)

Heartbreak


If my heart would have been page,
It would burn to ashes right now,
If my love would have been cage,
You would have died from too much affection,
Burning my heart in your hands,
Baby you laughed when you saw my face,
I pleaded and begged,
You said I wasn’t worth your wait,
So why go now and break my heart?
When you had the chance in the very start,
Your one hateful look,
Would have killed my hopes,
Why raise them high, feast on my misery,
When you knew I couldn’t cope,
So many buried dreams,
So many beautiful lies
Perhaps fooling me had been too easy,
Was it all a lesson aimed to teach?
Or just a brief respites need,
So much going through me,
But I have got nothing left to say,
Had you aimed to steal my soul?
Or fashion an empty human shell at its make,
Didn’t knew you were so cruel,
That you enjoyed my heartbreak………..

Submitted: Sunday, September 29, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013

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For one and only, you know i don't have to name you.

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  • Virginia Jennings (12/4/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading my poem. I loved this..so much emotion. I see a story in my head while I read it. Thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (11/26/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    Ouch, really a heartbreak. Lines are so meant and felt, emotions filled the air. You passed all those to your readers, nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/26/2013 7:59:00 AM)

    'If my heart would have been page,
    It would burn to ashes right now, '
    Felt the heat of your heart, right at start!

    'Why raise them high, feast on my misery,
    When you knew I couldn’t cope, '
    Here, ' feast on my misery' says a lot more than what you've written.

    'Didn’t knew you were so cruel,
    That you enjoyed my heartbreak……….. '
    Touched me! (Report) Reply

  • Benjuzzy Okpuzor (10/6/2013 2:24:00 PM)

    I love this poem, just like my favourite poem CURSED IS LOVE FOR YOUR SAKE its very touching keep it going boss (Report) Reply

  • Myla Rose Gigante (10/6/2013 8:42:00 AM)

    This piece is kinda other version of my new poem ‘Strange Love‘ and also Dislocated Heart‘s poem, ‘Isnt For Me‘... ^_^ (Report) Reply

  • Alireza Asgari (10/3/2013 2:31:00 PM)

    Awesome! It's a very nice expression of a heartbreak feeling.remembered me the experience I had.Lucifera! you killed me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Unbreakable Heart (10/3/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    It touches me so much : (.. anyways this is really good to be broken hearted leads us to fight more and continue believing the power of love! (Report) Reply

  • Nicholas Nikolov (10/2/2013 9:14:00 PM)

    Heeyyy Lucifera! ! ! : D

    This is a truly beautiful poem! ! ! : D In all honesty, I became teary eyed while reading your wonderful poem because your passionate feelings are exactly what was and certainly still swirls in my heart and mind from my most recent breakup. Especially with these amazing phrases

    .... why go now and break my heart?
    When you had the chance in the very start,
    Your one hateful look,
    Would have killed my hopes,
    Why raise them high, feast on my misery,
    When you knew I couldn't cope,
    So many buried dreams,
    So many beautiful lies
    Perhaps fooling me had been too easy, ...

    FABULOUSLY WRITTEN! ! ! ! ! ! ! : D

    HE DOES NOT DESERVE YOUR BEAUTIFUL HEART, SOUL & MIND! ! ! ! : D (Report) Reply

  • Abhishek Mishra (9/30/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    Sad..but, everything happens for a good reason.Perhaps there is someone more deserving for you: -) (Report) Reply

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