Could You Say? Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

Could You Say?

Rating: 4.7


When you smile with a cheerful face
Touching my soul staying far far away,
I dream of you with a delightful mind
And live for you every night and day.

When you are there very near to me,
And end my long time waiting spree,
I long to gift a fresh red rose,
And wish to hold you and walk together free.

When your small fingers touch my palm
And makes you passionate and intensely shiver,
I feel like starting a beautiful journey,
Sailing together to the horizon, in the lone river.

When you look deep into my eyes
And turn your face into crimson red,
I wish to touch your tender lips
And lovingly kiss your forehead.

I embrace my heart with your thoughts,
They seek some moments for me to say,
My wish cries to hug you tight,
And make a memorable romantic day.

Is it my love that speaks for you? Could you say?


Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tajudeen Shah 14 December 2012

Dear Poet, I am very much honored to find you and your verses. From the first glance itself, the class of the romantic flame within you is self announcing! Ages might trample human experiences, winnings and even long-cherished dreams and expectations, but the kind of mellifluous muse might keep permeating over generations. Your craft has its peculiar hue and scent. Maintain them for ever more. I would love to read some more, let me. will duly mail you. take care. rgds. tajudeen shah

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Philo Yan 18 December 2012

Expressing the thoughts of a person in love can only be done by a poet who has experienced it. And it clearly shows in your words.

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Aloke Mukherjee 19 December 2012

Simple and intensely romantic. you have rhymed with a deft hand. Very good poems.

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Neela Nath Das 24 December 2012

Well-rhymed beautiful poem. Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you and your family.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

its really beautiful and very romantic.. well crafted and nice imagery....

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Yash Shinde 02 April 2014

........a lovely romantic lay, brings out all emotions beautifully.........

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Crystal Conrick-knight 09 February 2014

I have read over 10 of your poems now so far I like this one best and rated it a 10.

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Sandra Kelley 15 July 2013

i like this one the most

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Jenie Franksay 10 July 2013

wow great write... nice expression i invite you to read and comment on my poems.

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Divya Gupta 08 July 2013

Wow! Realy fantastic.. It reveals ur feelings n love 4 d 1 u wrote..: -)

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