Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 239 Points (Kolkata, India)

Could You Say? - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

When you smile with a cheerful face
Touching my soul staying far far away,
I dream of you with a delightful mind
And live for you every night and day.

When you are there very near to me,
And end my long time waiting spree,
I long to gift a fresh red rose,
And wish to hold you and walk together free.

When your small fingers touch my palm
And makes you passionate and intensely shiver,
I feel like starting a beautiful journey,
Sailing together to the horizon, in the lone river.

When you look deep into my eyes
And turn your face into crimson red,
I wish to touch your tender lips
And lovingly kiss your forehead.

I embrace my heart with your thoughts,
They seek some moments for me to say,
My wish cries to hug you tight,
And make a memorable romantic day.

Is it my love that speaks for you? Could you say?

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Comments about Could You Say? by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/2/2014 9:45:00 AM)

    ........a lovely romantic lay, brings out all emotions beautifully......... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Crystal Conrick-knight (2/9/2014 10:14:00 PM)

    I have read over 10 of your poems now so far I like this one best and rated it a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Kelley (7/15/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    i like this one the most (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 191 Points Jenie Franksay (7/10/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    wow great write... nice expression

    i invite you to read and comment on my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Divya Gupta (7/8/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    Wow! Realy fantastic.. It reveals ur feelings n love 4 d 1 u wrote..: -) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,619 Points Kavya . (7/8/2013 3:38:00 AM)

    wow a beautiful romantic poem...loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anastasia Rai (6/22/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    I love it! I love your descriptions and the beauty in it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Ketan Hukare (2/11/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    Love.......bound in everyone's life......... :)
    Nice..........I like the way u expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 811 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (1/10/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Carnal love throbs violently between the symbols.A fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,928 Points * Sunprincess * (1/10/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    this is a most beautiful write and so romantic..I love it! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,440 Points Sallam Yassin (1/9/2013 5:42:00 AM)

    could you speak
    from heart
    deep and sweet
    like that
    amaze (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,500 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (12/30/2012 2:13:00 PM)

    its really beautiful and very romantic.. well crafted and nice imagery.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (12/24/2012 8:25:00 PM)

    Well-rhymed beautiful poem. Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you and your family. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Aloke Mukherjee (12/19/2012 5:27:00 AM)

    Simple and intensely romantic. you have rhymed with a deft hand. Very good poems. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,133 Points Philo Yan (12/18/2012 8:38:00 PM)

    Expressing the thoughts of a person in love can only be done by a poet who has experienced it. And it clearly shows in your words. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,394 Points Tajudeen Shah (12/14/2012 10:12:00 AM)

    Dear Poet,
    I am very much honored to find you and your verses. From the first glance itself, the class of the romantic flame within you is self announcing! Ages might trample human experiences, winnings and even long-cherished dreams and expectations, but the kind of mellifluous muse might keep permeating over generations. Your craft has its peculiar hue and scent. Maintain them for ever more. I would love to read some more, let me. will duly mail you. take care. rgds.
    tajudeen shah (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (12/6/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    A romantic poem with over flowing love so gently told touches the chords of the heart.A true poem with rhyme and rhythm is splendid! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 263 Points Supriya Prathapan (12/4/2012 9:13:00 AM)

    A beautiful 'love' poem. Romance and Respect rolled up together. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 103 Points Neetha Sasidharan (12/4/2012 5:02:00 AM)

    so cool n rich poem...grt going..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,462 Points Valsa George (12/3/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    Outpouring of passionate romance! The question at the end is redundant! You yourself have answered it! A well structured poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 23, 2012

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