Chopin's Piano Concerto Number Two Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

Chopin's Piano Concerto Number Two

Rating: 4.5


Endless scales and arpeggios,
Smooth as summer's sweet apple blossoms.
Dramatic, as well as dainty.
Tastes like the look of drifting snow.
Smoothness of the piano keys.
Concerto Number Two

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 07 February 2014

cassie, a wonderful little gem. i might like it even more if i were a great pianist as you are (will be?) . unlike, apparently, Khainul, i really liked the line: Tastes like the look of drifting snow. in fact, it is my favorite line of the poem. i might have written Smoothness of vanilla Häagen-Dazs® ice cream, instead of piano keys. this is my second-favorite line: Smooth as summer's sweet apple blossoms. thanks for sharing. :) bri p.s. i just noticed, while proofreading my comment, that you used BOTH smooth and smoothness in one little poem. well, it worked. the piece must really be SMOOTH!

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2013

'Tastes like the look of drifting snow.' How can something taste like the 'look' of another?

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Goldheart Bird 08 September 2013

Lovly poem! Love how you discribe! Keep on the grood work! Allison

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