Cassandra Jasmine

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Chopin's Piano Concerto Number Two - Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

Endless scales and arpeggios,
Smooth as summer's sweet apple blossoms.
Dramatic, as well as dainty.
Tastes like the look of drifting snow.
Smoothness of the piano keys.
Concerto Number Two

Comments about Chopin's Piano Concerto Number Two by Cassandra Jasmine

  • Gold Star - 16,844 Points John Westlake (8/27/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Am no pianist, but even I can appreciate a poem about music. I have not allowed myself an opportunity to listen to it before. Maybe you're trying to advertise it? ? I'll think about it (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,170 Points Bri Edwards (2/7/2014 1:08:00 PM)

    cassie, a wonderful little gem. i might like it even more if i were a great pianist as you are (will be?) .
    unlike, apparently, Khainul, i really liked the line:

    Tastes like the look of drifting snow.

    in fact, it is my favorite line of the poem.

    i might have written Smoothness of vanilla Häagen-Dazs® ice cream, instead of piano keys.

    this is my second-favorite line:

    Smooth as summer's sweet apple blossoms. thanks for sharing. :) bri

    p.s. i just noticed, while proofreading my comment, that you used BOTH smooth and smoothness in one little poem. well, it worked. the piece must really be SMOOTH! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,202 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/9/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    'Tastes like the look of drifting snow.'
    How can something taste like the 'look' of another? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (9/8/2013 5:41:00 PM)

    Lovly poem! Love how you discribe! Keep on the grood work!
    Allison (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 21, 2013

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