Treasure Island

Irene ClarkHogg


Candlelight


The candle burns, a steady flame
that smoothes the lines and folds of time,
and brings out from the past a youth.

The candle shines, a gentle light
that soothes the scars of careworn hands,
revealing character and the truth.

The candle glows, a kindly light
erasing shadows of sin and sorrow,
showing her the hidden prize.

The candle gleams, revealing a promise
a glimpse of tomorrows, lips and laughter;
reflecting the love-light in his eyes.

Submitted: Thursday, March 27, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 28, 2014

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Topic(s): Love

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  • Thomas Vaughan Jones (4/6/2014 2:05:00 AM)

    Crumbs! Same subject, same emotives, differing content.
    An Old Love, Viewed by Candle Light.

    Great minds think alike :) (Report) Reply

  • Lilac Time (3/27/2014 11:33:00 PM)

    This is beautiful I love the line that smooths the lines and folds of time that's so beautiful....folds of time...what a wonderful line, wish I thought of it myself! (Report) Reply

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