Queeny Gona

Silver Star - 3,757 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

***birthday Wish*** - Poem by Queeny Gona

On a fine morning, by the side of a shore:
You shine like a bright sun.
On a fine evening,
You bloom as a jasmine: spreading your lovely fragrance to all.
You lit our hearts,
With your pretty smiles.
Every time you touch upon our souls:
With your cheerful presence.
These are the times,
You make us feel proud, to have you as a friend!


Comments about ***birthday Wish*** by Queeny Gona

  • (5/19/2017 4:20:00 AM)


    What a beautiful wish on a friend's birthday. Your friend must be elated n proud to receive such a lovely token of love, warmth n tenderness. A 10. (Report) Reply

    Queeny Gona Queeny Gona (5/24/2017 3:54:00 AM)

    Thank you for the read and comment dear Ma'am. I am happy to see your ratings on my work!

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  • Chinedu Dike (1/17/2017 7:46:00 PM)


    Beautiful rendition of 'sweet words'. Lovely poem elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Queeny. (Report) Reply

    Queeny Gona Queeny Gona (1/29/2017 7:49:00 AM)

    Thank you Sir.Pleasure is mine to see you comment on my muse.

  • (11/13/2015 4:26:00 PM)


    The wish will surely be granted to such a soul full wish...regards (Report) Reply

    Queeny Gona Queeny Gona (1/29/2017 7:50:00 AM)

    Thank you Sir

  • Captain Herbert Poetry (5/21/2015 11:45:00 AM)


    Such a wonderful gift in your wish of your birthday.
    a touch in a heart feels in your poem
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    Queeny Gona Queeny Gona (1/29/2017 7:51:00 AM)

    I am honoured. Thank you for the read and comment dear poet.

  • (7/1/2010 12:59:00 PM)


    This is such a cheery, light poem, so enjoyed; D (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2010 4:19:00 AM)


    I think this is especially written for me...........................
    Thanks a Lot. So Nice with Simple and understanding.
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  • (11/4/2009 10:47:00 AM)


    ohh...how nice wishes are being made for a friend..almost touched me..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (9/2/2009 7:09:00 PM)


    This is so well written that reveals the true friendship between the two. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2009 4:12:00 AM)


    a friend is a friend always not merely on birthdays. but on those days he certainly shines. nice poem
    voted10
    surya
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  • (6/16/2009 3:27:00 AM)


    lovely wish, every friend will wish for such a wish.... nice... (Report) Reply

  • (6/11/2009 10:46:00 AM)


    a sweet sunny birthday message..10+ (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (6/5/2009 9:07:00 AM)


    Queeny dear,
    This is what is expected of modern Englishe poets. Simple language with striking imagery and touching subject. Beautiful...........10++++++
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  • (6/5/2009 7:53:00 AM)


    A heart warming birthday wish.............Thanks! ! ! 10+++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 5, 2009



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