Queeny Gona

Veteran Poet - 1,579 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

My Wish To Fly - Poem by Queeny Gona

If I have given a wish!
I would fly high in the sky.
Not just for the joy of flying,
Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
Drag their masks out of their faces.
Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
To build a cheaters free society.


Comments about My Wish To Fly by Queeny Gona

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (1/21/2016 4:10:00 AM)

    To dream along with the joy of your heart! With hope and faith. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (10/22/2015 10:03:00 AM)

    Very commendable desire but quite difficult to accomplish. As a poem it is enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. Ten points. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (10/22/2015 9:21:00 AM)

    The poem shows your commitment to remove all ills afflicting the society. Amazing poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (10/22/2015 4:48:00 AM)

    Dreams are part of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda Anil Kumar Panda (10/22/2015 1:07:00 AM)

    Nice thought.Wish I could fly with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (9/9/2015 9:53:00 PM)

    Your focus on social concerns and also on the hypocrisy of people is commendable. Thanks. Following lines say it eloquently:
    Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
    But: to trace the hypocrites in the society (Report) Reply

  • Paul Amrod Paul Amrod (9/9/2015 5:45:00 PM)

    Hi Quenny, My comment is much like Valsa George that we believe in your conviction and search for truth and justice.
    Saying out of their faces means that it was a part of their face which is also true and the permanent sheep's clothing that the leopards have is simply ripped out. Very strong and dynamic language. Thank you for your revolutionary comments. From an old Woodstock Hippy Paul (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (9/9/2015 3:00:00 PM)

    o trace the hypocrites in the society
    And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
    Drag their masks out of their faces.
    Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
    To build a cheaters free society. this is a great vision my dear Poetess. if you can fly..so high, please do it. let your dream come true dear. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Ging Taping Ging Taping (8/3/2015 12:50:00 AM)

    This is also my wish to flyhigh into the sky..to relax away from work and just glide with the clouds.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (6/15/2015 1:06:00 PM)

    You have high ideals and high spirits.Nice penning dear Queeny. (Report) Reply

  • Hannington Mumo (6/12/2015 2:55:00 AM)

    This is my wish, too. A well-crafted piece of art dear.10/10... (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (5/29/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    Beyond the innocent whim to fly in the sky for joy, you have much more serious objectives..... like creating a world free of swindlers and hypocrites! A poem charged with idealism! (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (5/11/2015 8:19:00 AM)

    Good poem, flows well. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/4/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    If I have three thumbs they will surely be up... Penned very well here as in penned very well! (Report) Reply

  • Sreejith Kulaparambil (5/22/2010 6:06:00 AM)

    dear Gona, i believe you are an idealist and patriotic... and salute to you and your attitude.. good short one.. loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Sam Ch (5/19/2010 4:10:00 AM)

    'remove the sheep cloth out of leopards'

    I like the formate. (Report) Reply

  • Rachel Ann Butler (11/4/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    ' I would fly high in the sky'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (10/31/2009 7:58:00 AM)

    you have a theme a message there and a courageous voice to raise! i liked the vision inside your write Queeny...good piece...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (9/2/2009 7:07:00 PM)

    Like a spiderman, I wish you get the bird's wings to fly, in order to have cheater free society. Your hidden feelings to reform this society have come out well in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nooruddeen Mm Nooruddeen Mm (6/23/2009 2:43:00 PM)

    Dear Queeny
    You may be able to fly, sky high, enjoy the nature
    But to remove the hypocrites from this world, impossible.
    Appreciate your wish to remove those elements from the world.

    Good writing
    Thanks for sharing

    Nooruddeen (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013


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