Queeny Gona

Rookie - 158 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

My wish to fly


If I have given a wish!
I would fly high in the sky.
Not just for the joy of flying,
Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
Drag their masks out of their faces.
Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
To build a cheaters free society.

Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013

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  • Rookie - 46 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/4/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    If I have three thumbs they will surely be up... Penned very well here as in penned very well! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (5/22/2010 6:06:00 AM)

    dear Gona, i believe you are an idealist and patriotic... and salute to you and your attitude.. good short one.. loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sam Ch (5/19/2010 4:10:00 AM)

    'remove the sheep cloth out of leopards'

    I like the formate. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/4/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    ' I would fly high in the sky'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/31/2009 7:58:00 AM)

    you have a theme a message there and a courageous voice to raise! i liked the vision inside your write Queeny...good piece...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (9/2/2009 7:07:00 PM)

    Like a spiderman, I wish you get the bird's wings to fly, in order to have cheater free society. Your hidden feelings to reform this society have come out well in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Nooruddeen Mm (6/23/2009 2:43:00 PM)

    Dear Queeny
    You may be able to fly, sky high, enjoy the nature
    But to remove the hypocrites from this world, impossible.
    Appreciate your wish to remove those elements from the world.

    Good writing
    Thanks for sharing

    Nooruddeen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie shalini sundararamalingam (6/16/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    huh huh, nice wish! ! if cheaters know the reason why you are flying they'll pull you down... nice thought! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/12/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    You wrote it with a great sense of humor but very realistic......the best wish of all.Good writes Gona. (Report) Reply

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