Queeny Gona

Freshman - 936 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

My Wish To Fly - Poem by Queeny Gona

If I have given a wish!
I would fly high in the sky.
Not just for the joy of flying,
Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
Drag their masks out of their faces.
Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
To build a cheaters free society.


Comments about My Wish To Fly by Queeny Gona

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Bharati Nayak (6/15/2015 1:06:00 PM)

    You have high ideals and high spirits.Nice penning dear Queeny. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Bronze Star - 2,003 Points Hannington Mumo (6/12/2015 2:55:00 AM)

    This is my wish, too. A well-crafted piece of art dear.10/10... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,150 Points Valsa George (5/29/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    Beyond the innocent whim to fly in the sky for joy, you have much more serious objectives..... like creating a world free of swindlers and hypocrites! A poem charged with idealism! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 774 Points Juan Olivarez (5/11/2015 8:19:00 AM)

    Good poem, flows well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/4/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    If I have three thumbs they will surely be up... Penned very well here as in penned very well! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (5/22/2010 6:06:00 AM)

    dear Gona, i believe you are an idealist and patriotic... and salute to you and your attitude.. good short one.. loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sam Ch (5/19/2010 4:10:00 AM)

    'remove the sheep cloth out of leopards'

    I like the formate. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/4/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    ' I would fly high in the sky'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/31/2009 7:58:00 AM)

    you have a theme a message there and a courageous voice to raise! i liked the vision inside your write Queeny...good piece...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (9/2/2009 7:07:00 PM)

    Like a spiderman, I wish you get the bird's wings to fly, in order to have cheater free society. Your hidden feelings to reform this society have come out well in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Nooruddeen Mm (6/23/2009 2:43:00 PM)

    Dear Queeny
    You may be able to fly, sky high, enjoy the nature
    But to remove the hypocrites from this world, impossible.
    Appreciate your wish to remove those elements from the world.

    Good writing
    Thanks for sharing

    Nooruddeen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie shalini sundararamalingam (6/16/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    huh huh, nice wish! ! if cheaters know the reason why you are flying they'll pull you down... nice thought! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/12/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    You wrote it with a great sense of humor but very realistic......the best wish of all.Good writes Gona. (Report) Reply

Read all 13 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013


[Hata Bildir]