Queeny Gona

Rookie - 158 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

**Closed Doors**


JOURNEY OF MY SOUL INTO THE MIND OF A GIRL:
'Enjoyed the pampering of parents
but then, came my sibling
grabbing my love from all.
Poor child! The doors are closed for Love.

I started blooming in my studies
but, perceived as a burden!
So studies ended up with schooling
Poor child! The doors are closed for Education.

Diverted my mind into the field of weaving
but then, their was a tie up between my job and home making.
conceived as a time consuming.
Poor child! The doors are closed for Self reliance.

Had been into the world of pampering,
UNLIKE THE PAST, showered the love for both.
Brought up both as equals.
The doors are closed for PARTIALITY.'

Submitted: Saturday, June 06, 2009

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Comments about this poem (**Closed Doors** by Queeny Gona )

  • Rookie - 274 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/7/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    very, very nice...i enjoyed this poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (12/10/2013 7:23:00 AM)

    Yes, there was a time when all doors were closed before a girl child. But thank God! Times have changed and the preference and partiality between sexes are dwindling! ! A good write, Queeny! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (9/27/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    girls need and should have the same rights to work and provide as men. a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (9/2/2009 7:15:00 PM)

    The feelings of a girl through out her life is brought out clearly. In this male dominated society, how girls are being treated could been seen from the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Surya . (7/2/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    really wonderfull poem.lifes paradox explained in detail.beautifull write. i love this poem.
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie shalini sundararamalingam (6/26/2009 3:36:00 AM)

    nice poem queeny, its true that for many of us many doors are closed... but luckily god opens us some other door... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (6/10/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    This is so true Queeny happening in many families. A very good topic u picked up and so well dealt with. (Report) Reply

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