Queeny Gona

Rookie - 168 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

Moaning Bird - Poem by Queeny Gona

I used to fly all over the world
Chirping along with my flock
Flying round and round and round
But now I am all alone caged here
Missing my friends and family
Above all, my freedom.
My feelings! The selfishmen never care
Chained me, wore me and tore me
My body, mind and soul their slaves.
A helpless tiny bird in hostel
What can she look forward to?
Will ever freedom come my way!


Comments about Moaning Bird by Queeny Gona

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (8/21/2014 8:08:00 AM)

    Such occasional confinement is nice Queeny! Even the hostel life, you can enjoy! There also you may have a flock of birds of a same feather, if you identify! Only thing, your sky won't be as vast as what you had earlier!

    You have successfully captured the ennui felt by a home loving girl in a hostel! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (10/10/2012 3:31:00 PM)

    Hello write one sweet lyric queen! Very sad but still i know the value of it! U have done it in style! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (9/28/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    I can feel the agony in yr words queen, Life is a chess game when we like rook we will get elephant. You r not alone were are there with you. Soon I hope you get right channel. It's matter of time. Don't loose faith in you. Let the men and world die, It's wolf-race! Nicely penned off! Kudos! Dosth! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/3/2010 3:15:00 PM)

    A good description of bondage. Being ensnared, emotions well portrayed through your pen.Well done: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/22/2010 9:09:00 AM)

    emotions well transferred to this poem... nice write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (5/15/2010 2:27:00 AM)

    You described the sadness and frustration very well. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venkatesh Pelluru (10/23/2009 4:40:00 AM)

    ya every ones thought of a free bird u mentioned it beatifullu gona (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (10/6/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    if she does not like hostel, let her be a day scholar.nice poem
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shekhar Joshi (6/9/2009 2:45:00 AM)

    excellent expression of your feelings........

    amazing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (6/1/2009 12:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem with touching feelings.
    Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (11/13/2008 7:10:00 AM)

    Wonderful start Queeny with beautiful words and touching feelings......You earned my all votes........10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,980 Points Kee Thampi (11/11/2008 2:29:00 AM)

    my freedom.
    My feelings! The selfishmen never care
    Chained me, wore me and tore me
    My body, mind

    free to this manor of God (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 11, 2008



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