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MOANING BIRD

I used to fly all over the world
Chirping along with my flock
Flying round and round and round
But now I am all alone caged here
Missing my friends and family
Above all, my freedom.
My feelings! The selfishmen never care
Chained me, wore me and tore me
My body, mind and soul their slaves.
A helpless tiny bird in hostel
What can she look forward to?
Will ever freedom come my way!

Submitted: Tuesday, November 11, 2008


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  • Harindhar Reddy (10/10/2012 3:31:00 PM)

    Hello write one sweet lyric queen! Very sad but still i know the value of it! U have done it in style!

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  • Harindhar Reddy (9/28/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    I can feel the agony in yr words queen, Life is a chess game when we like rook we will get elephant. You r not alone were are there with you. Soon I hope you get right channel. It's matter of time. Don't loose faith in you. Let the men and world die, It's wolf-race! Nicely penned off! Kudos! Dosth!

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/3/2010 3:15:00 PM)

    A good description of bondage. Being ensnared, emotions well portrayed through your pen.Well done: D

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/22/2010 9:09:00 AM)

    emotions well transferred to this poem... nice write!

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/15/2010 2:27:00 AM)

    You described the sadness and frustration very well. thank you

  • Venkatesh Pelluru (10/23/2009 4:40:00 AM)

    ya every ones thought of a free bird u mentioned it beatifullu gona

  • surya . (10/6/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    if she does not like hostel, let her be a day scholar.nice poem
    voted10
    surya

  • Shekhar Joshi (6/9/2009 2:45:00 AM)

    excellent expression of your feelings........

    amazing! !

  • Ravi Sathasivam (6/1/2009 12:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem with touching feelings.
    Great write.

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (11/13/2008 7:10:00 AM)

    Wonderful start Queeny with beautiful words and touching feelings......You earned my all votes........10

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