Beside Me Is Still Some Water Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Beside Me Is Still Some Water

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Beside me is still some water; and therein I lay,
sloughing off bark where mossy patches dream.
Funny how time lets dreams float away, down
stream, while the forest moves it in, ever closer.
Soft splashes cover water that drips serendipity,
and it defines our waiting, for something exciting.
And resting inside a hollow shaped spoon am I,
still too large, I hold my breath, while you walk by.
You stop, bend down and hold off my imagination
and being satisfied, you shift the moon around it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 04 November 2009

i don't have a clue what you're talking about here but that doesn't mean I don't find it beautiful.... :)

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Goldy Locks 06 September 2009

Pleasant poetry. Imaginative, complex yet refined and simple. Keep on, goldy

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Tai Chi Italy 06 September 2009

Stunning imagery here my friend...the final lines are masterful. Smiling at you Tai

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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