Is It Poetry

Silver Star - 3,477 Points (1958 - / Bus-Boys And Poets, Washington D.C.)

...................she is afraid, he is tired..


She is he,
and he is She.
The two,
now lost, loves heart.
And bright,
the yellow sun.

You once we're two,
as one,
and ran around the world.
Inside both heads.

He fell inside loves fire.
And she,
his red heart pumping burned

Both fires,
burned ice cold hot.
Within Her,
light did give U.S. form.

Over shadows love,
swept out black coals.

Your smile, twin lips.
He kissed, both miss.


His face, from that.
Bright coals, still hiss.

Now alone again,
he walks into.

Loves,
loving great full moon.

Submitted: Saturday, May 16, 2009
Edited: Friday, May 10, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 15,998 Points Mandolyn ... (7/22/2014 7:43:00 PM)

    loves loving
    great full moon

    ^ i think it reads better in that format
    and i liked this bullet, i did (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (5/29/2013 6:50:00 PM)

    a good write about a lost love.Perhaps t will return someday. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (12/4/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    hope they find this love again..fabulous write. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (10/26/2009 3:29:00 PM)

    Brilliant take off but poetic twisted touch down. Wow!
    Ten++
    dr.sakti

    PS Please visit me.
    ds (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/28/2009 11:13:00 PM)

    breathtaking is the effect of the pauses. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/21/2009 7:43:00 PM)

    nice theme! ! ! lovely words! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie HaZeM PaKKaR (8/19/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    so inspiring..
    i like this hazy atmosphere..
    sweet & funny..
    thanks for sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie lisa moore (8/10/2009 7:55:00 PM)

    this poem is sooooo good
    i love it!
    please keep writing
    luv lisa xo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy Douglass (Fifita) (7/29/2009 6:48:00 PM)

    AWESOME...i love it...XOXO (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dmitry Wild (7/7/2009 1:14:00 PM)

    yeahyeah... i dig that emotion...
    u write like u speak...
    niice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Original Unknown Girl (6/29/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    This so reminds me of E E Cummings' poetry. Rather magical. Beautiful throughout. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristina B; Williams (6/26/2009 6:51:00 PM)

    ABSOLUTELY ENTHRALLING..ANOTHER 10..I FEEL LIKE SIMON ON AMERICAN IDOL, WHEN I SAY THIS..IT IS VERY RARE THAT I GIVE 10S..SO WHEN I DO, BELIEVE ME I ENJOY EM..THANKS 4 THE INVITE, NOW IVE GOT ANOTHER POET THATS INSIGHTFUL...IVE RECIEVED LIKE 60 INVITES, READ, VOTED EVERY1....REPLIED, NEVER LIED TO ANY OF THEM, NEVER WILL..I GOT A TOP TEN POET LIST ON THIS PROGRAM, POEMHUNTERS, AND YOUR IN THAT 10, CONGRATS..HOPE THAT DIDNT COME OUT WRONG, NOT LIKE IM SOMEBODY SPECIAL, LIKE SAYING THAT IF I GIVE YOU 10S, THAT IT MEANS A BIG THING, WHAT I MEAN IS THAT BESIDES MY OWN POEMS, IM NOT A BIG FAN OF READING POEMS...NO THAT CAME OUT WRONG AGAIN..SO I WILL JUST SIMPLY SAY, YOU ARE A GREAT POET, YOUR POEMS ARE ENJOYFUL TO READ..HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING, CUZ YOUR ONE OF THE FEW WHO ARE THE GREAT 1S (Report) Reply

  • Rookie T McH (6/22/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    'It is your sea' has to be one of the most adorable and insightful lines. t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Eyelizabeth Unknown (5/24/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    mmmmy how complex - it reflects; } openly i see (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,936 Points Ken E Hall (5/23/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    You erase with your smile.. and give everyone an injection of happiness.Nice metaphors
    and food for thought, thanks for the read +++10 regards
    uavaniceday (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (5/21/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    It is a wonderful unique piece iip....Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bright Rose (5/17/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    that was sweet and lovely, nice use of words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (5/16/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    it is tired..*smile*

    It is remarkable remarks.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 212 Points Micron (5/16/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    love it

    hugs micron (Report) Reply

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