Lilyann Monahan

Rookie (2-10-68 / Miami)

Bare


Stripped bare to nothing but a soul,
obscured to the human eye,
chained modesty to mockery,
my desolation seeks a cry.
Embracing neglect and vacancy,
enabling my heart to conceal,
the potency of my love for him,
and the hunger I have to feel.
A fine line between fragility and strength,
perceiving the injustice he's done,
yet with the perception, my heart believes,
he's failed to complete what he's done.

Submitted: Monday, October 14, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013

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  • Rookie - 221 Points John Shea (10/29/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    I myself feel stripped and weathered in this life with love lost and and times love found..profound poem..to say the least....Pup (Report) Reply

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