A Lie Poem by Lilyann Monahan

A Lie

Rating: 5.0


Don't lie and say you love me,
I know you don't at all.
This mission that you are on,
will drive me up the wall.
I'm not quitting any vice,
until I see your face,
Then I'll do as you please,
and get my sub space.
You're not in charge this time Sir,
It took me too long to get here,
where I make the decisions now,
If you don't like it, don't stay near.
You screwed it up the first time,
didn't realize I'm a prize.
And now you'll risk it all again,
and break off all our ties.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 01 February 2014

Wish the comment below were mine because it sums it up exactly. Well done. Read mine - Despair - Adeline

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Wahab Abdul 04 November 2013

this is a fine piece..well flowed...enjoyed reading..

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Nivedita Patnaik 23 October 2013

The last 4 lines says it all....the choice of language is aptly used...loved it.

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