At The Finest Moment Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

At The Finest Moment

Rating: 5.0


Here we've only a very short of span to sing:
At th' finest moment when the bells ring,
We become free from the chain of time,
Forsaking the face covered with grime.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 02 October 2012

VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL LINES. BREVITY IS THE BEAUTY OF LIFE AND THE POEM TOO

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Karen Sinclair 02 October 2012

Beautiful language, incorporating a little middle english....lovely....tyvm karen

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 03 October 2012

Short but powerful poem my friend. Siya_! !

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Payal Parande 06 October 2012

wonderful and beautiful...you take me to an another world thank you for sharing sir love payal

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A B 11 October 2012

short n sweet and how true.........

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Valsa George 14 December 2012

Such a beautiful quatrain, in perfect rhyme and packed with meaning! !

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 27 November 2012

great realization of life with a few lines. Simple but exceptional.

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Wabi Sabi 21 November 2012

I like the way it sounds. It sounds as if arrogant, but very tender. I want to be a part of it there.

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Sallam Yassin 17 November 2012

concentrated as nectar pure and wise few lines of life well done

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Hazel Durham 17 November 2012

Amazing write, in just a few lines you have put life into perspective!

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