Aspiration Poem by Mary Forrester

Aspiration

Rating: 4.8


In this still and perished night
On the stairway to the moon
Stars electric blue
Dazzling our view
Gravity a force
Curiosity infinite
As I walk
On the stairway to the moon
Electric White engulfs
A sky of red and blue
You and me forever
On the stairway to the moon.

Tuesday, January 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 22 January 2015

Lovely Mary, very inspired.

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Hazel Durham 27 January 2015

What a beautiful gem you have written, perfect!

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Noreen Carden 28 January 2015

Beautifully written lovely description and a joy to read

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Clarence Prince 01 February 2015

You and me forever On the stairway to the moon. Love standing strong! Well done, Mary!

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Brave Hearts 01 February 2015

It rings in me a memorable honeymoon. Nice work, few but voluminous words!

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Lakshit 10 June 2022

"On the stairway to the moon" is very helpful poem

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Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2019

'You and me forever On the stairway to the moon' - The poem ends on such a happy note! Well done, Mary Forrester, the poem resonates!

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 July 2017

A great poetic sublimation. You may like to read my ars poetica (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2015

~~A very well written and evocative poem. Thank you for sharing.~~

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Kim Barney 17 February 2015

Very nice. Gives me a peaceful feeling. This is your newest poem, and it's almost a month old. Time to write a new one!

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