Mary Forrester


Pure Delight - Poem by Mary Forrester

Skies awashed in blue and pearl
Sun reflects a beam speckled yellow, green and blue
A blush of poppies amidst the meadow, silver green
Gently swaying in the breeze
Springs rapport with days of yore
Rocks amidst the velvet moss
As waters trickled past
I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple
Until the waters edge
Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees
And listened to the music flow


Comments about Pure Delight by Mary Forrester

  • Veteran Poet - 1,981 Points Noreen Carden (3/23/2015 10:52:00 AM)

    And it is a pure delight to read. Beautifully written Mary well done (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,964 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/19/2014 9:39:00 AM)

    Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees
    And listened to the music flow
    A beautiful poem which gives the impression of spring in its entirety.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,180 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/24/2014 6:34:00 AM)

    Bursting with a beauty that is bucolic.and causes one to say nature nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 310 Points John Brown (9/11/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Spring's rapport with days of yore. What a great line. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/9/2013 8:36:00 PM)

    I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple
    Until the waters edge
    Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees
    And listened to the music flow
    Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/9/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    It's a pure delight to imagine the imagery you pictured.
    'I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple
    Until the waters edge
    Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees
    And listened to the music flow '
    As though I am sitting beside you and watching this! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,778 Points Tiku . (4/15/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    very nice.pure and raw ink.keep inking. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,516 Points Adeline Foster (1/23/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    Indeed unique and interesting free verse, the feeling of peace is poignant. Read mine - O Dearest Love -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,234 Points Valerie Dohren (1/14/2013 2:58:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, full of meaning and very well written. A great metaphor. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, January 11, 2013


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