Pure Delight Poem by Mary Forrester

Pure Delight

Rating: 4.9


Skies awashed in blue and pearl
Sun reflects a beam speckled yellow, green and blue
A blush of poppies amidst the meadow, silver green
Gently swaying in the breeze
Springs rapport with days of yore
Rocks amidst the velvet moss
As waters trickled past
I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple
Until the waters edge
Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees
And listened to the music flow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 14 January 2013

Beautiful poem, full of meaning and very well written. A great metaphor.

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Adeline Foster 23 January 2013

Indeed unique and interesting free verse, the feeling of peace is poignant. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 April 2013

very nice.pure and raw ink.keep inking.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2013

It's a pure delight to imagine the imagery you pictured. 'I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple Until the waters edge Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees And listened to the music flow ' As though I am sitting beside you and watching this!

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2013

I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple Until the waters edge Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees And listened to the music flow Beautiful!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 September 2015

i dropped a pebble and watched the ripple until the waters edge then your pure delight and your ability to listen to the unheard of music. very nice poem thank you

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Noreen Carden 23 March 2015

And it is a pure delight to read. Beautifully written Mary well done

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 19 November 2014

Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees And listened to the music flow A beautiful poem which gives the impression of spring in its entirety. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Bursting with a beauty that is bucolic.and causes one to say nature nice!

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John Brown 11 September 2013

Spring's rapport with days of yore. What a great line.

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