Angel (1) Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Angel (1)

Rating: 5.0


Oh, angel thy comeliness
Will bloom the flowers
Of my blue night.
Come unto my Palace!
As I'm the king
Of this blue night;
I'll sweep away all thy darkness.
Together we shall sing,
The unsung song of our soul
Together we will breathe,
The fragrance of those flowers-
Bloomed in our hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Virginia Pecho Gely 28 December 2011

You are a magician of words Vipins. With your wand you turn simple words in a dream of colors and multitudes of images...You paint the marvelous lines of your poetry as Leonardo Da Vinci in Mona Lisa. A masterpiece.10++++

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Hans Vr 28 December 2011

Another master piece, Vipins. I agree very much with the comments below. This poem is very rich in images and the contrasts used give it a great flavour.

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Binish Cd 29 December 2011

this poem like a beautiful bird with its colored wings. really a great work....10marks

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Eric Cockrell 29 December 2011

the magic only the heart can know! good one!

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Hari Khabrani 30 December 2011

Lonliness fills only through someone specially named.

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Minu Alex 11 January 2012

This is a really a nice one! Soft and tender thoughts!

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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Wow, wow, this is fantastic.......10***** Rose

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Cristina Teodor 07 January 2012

You brought magic of a fairy night in such an amazing poem..Cristina Teodor

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Tsira Gogeshvili 06 January 2012

Beautiful east motive Vipins...10... Thanks for the invitation. Tsira.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 06 January 2012

The unsung song......bloomed in our hearts, brings out the magic of the peom. truly beautiful like flowers of love blooming in hearts. Narayanan.

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