Angel Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Angel

Rating: 2.6


No one can pacify the wave
Of heart that yearns for love.
No one can e'er crucify a heart,
Burning for love, e'en by a dart
When soul loses its dead calm
Tears soothe the wounds as a balm
But you will hear a list of jeremiad.
In my turbulent sea, she's a mermaid
To kiss her, I've to swim in a sea of love
To be not ever tossed by my heart's wave.

Sunday, November 20, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 21 November 2011

This is an amazing poem, Vipins! Full of mystery, like you cannot capture the depth of the person you were writing for. Like she is a mystical being you want to treasure, but too afraid she might loose that mystery you hold in your heart...

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Rachel Butler 20 July 2015

The lamenting of the heart only those who have loved can tell the sorrow and desire in words

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Dead Leaf 22 November 2011

Poem composed of true feelings... don't worry brother your mermaid will definitely love you....

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Andrew Blakemore 21 November 2011

A touching poem and very eloquently written, well done.

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2011

interesting love mystical poem-thank you for sharing

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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2011

Wonderful writing, the lovely heart that you posses deliver a warmth of feeling. Mystery in search, and standing with waved emotion you enclose the feel deeper than your skin..Oh the beautiful writing is here again, in your hand :) 'Angel of the sea'? ? so maybe you can use oxygen tank to reach her hahahaha..joking..lovely poem, like it so much! you really have talented hand no no not hand but mind because mind birthing your idea hahaha :) _Unwritten Soul

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