Save Me! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Save Me!

Rating: 4.0


I open the casement of my soul
To encamp me into your tent of life,
As I'm a temporary tenant in this world,
I want to be with the one I believe.

Be a shining loadstar to my sky
And guide me to elysian savanna,
Through your astral path,
And feed me with your manna.

Pour in my heart the elixir of love;
As my heart wants to be a cirrus cloud
Be a rising Sun in every dawn
And be a vesper in every eve.

The land and the sky are wide,
But nor I can walk or fly here
As I'm legless and wingless
In front of the stare of the world

But I cannot hide my eyes from their gaze.
When the dark clouds of my despair,
Glomerating and gushing incessant tears,
Of remorse in my every noon of night.

I drown into a bottomless abyss,
In the sea of my wounded tears
Where I drink the salinity of sin.
Where I'm alone and dying alive

O, Save me from this hell,
Lave my sin wholly,
And give me a holy life.
''I'll be your Slave for ever''.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 08 December 2011

To encounter misfortune as a sojourner in a strange place is greatly despairing, as the heart turns to God, its only Help - seeking pity with a remorseful plea, knowing that the time for an inevitable change is come. Deep and poignant with powerful message.

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Valsa George 05 April 2015

This prayer, I am sure has gone up to the Heavens! It has the strength and poignancy to melt even a rock hearted brute! Then think of God who is Mercy Immaculate..... He will wrap you so endearingly in His robe and hold you closer to His bosom! Glad to see you back Vipins!

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Dave Walker 29 September 2011

What can i say another good poem. You have mastered your craft.

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Matt Mooney 29 September 2011

A fine piece of work. A complete poem of love.10.

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Anhelica Velasquez 29 September 2011

words from the heart amazing and gorgeos... :)

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Craig Moses Uche 13 February 2018

Nice really depicts emotion

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yada uche 06 December 2017

as I am legless and wingless In front of the stare of the world Top stuff

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Craig Moses Uche 06 December 2017

as I am legless and wingless In front of the stair of the world! ! ! U ar good!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Where i'm alone and dying alive. Nice piece of work.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Ehrte i'm alone and dying alive. Nice piece of work.

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