An Ode Poem by Laurie hill

An Ode

Rating: 5.0


(An ode to my typing skills: 0) .)

Like a circling hawk, over the corn,
Searching in patient swoops,
An index finger, so forlorn,
In ever decreasing loops.
Then like a kestrel, hovers,
Above his chosen prey,
Drops like a stone, all alone
To stab the letter ''A''.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Van Den Berg 13 February 2009

Giggles! Enjoyed this and saw it so very clearly!

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M A 20 February 2009

Very witty. A consistent soothing style with emotions.

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Martin Swords 15 March 2009

Lovely Typinh.....Martib

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Sonya Florentino 01 April 2009

lol.. you may have terrible typing skills, but what beautiful poems have come out of it! :)

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Ruth Walters 13 April 2009

haha, I liked this one very much.....this little bird touch types.

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beautiful. interestingly i am now typing in the dark, so yea.. those fingers have a hawk's vision

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Ivor Hogg 07 August 2009

Describes me to a Tee

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The hawk is a great simile Laurie. You have much skill and imagery how you take yourself to another place to continue the theme, 10 Karin Anderson

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Sally Carter 05 July 2009

Hehehe...... Didn't know you'd met my husband.

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Adeline Foster 04 May 2009

I like, I like. Great inspiration there. Adeline

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