Ageless Poem by Laurie hill

Ageless

Rating: 5.0


Your laughter,
gentle wind chimes on a spring day,

Your voice,
warm and soft, a kings mistress

Your heart,
oh your heart, what can i say,

Your smile,
your charm, ageless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Myrtle Thomas 06 April 2009

A poem befitting a Queen.Most lovely.A 10

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Sandra Martyres 07 April 2009

A Simple beautiful poem......10++++

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Fiona Davidson 08 April 2009

Wonderful gentle write Laurie...beautiful thank you...Fi 10+++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 11 April 2009

Tender Love and laughter - painting a warm picture of a new love...Like this

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Duh Huh 28 April 2009

You have a way with a womans heart and your poems show it. The way to a womans heart is not diamonds its romance :) Thank you for sharing.

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Meggie Gultiano 20 August 2009

your words are ageless too.This is great.

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this poem too shall be, Ageless.

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

Irresistible, isn't he! Good work.

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Ivor Hogg 07 August 2009

What woman could resist

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Fay Slimm 06 August 2009

Full of tenderness Laurie - - - very appealing 10 form Fay...

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