Ask Of Me Poem by Laurie hill

Ask Of Me

Rating: 5.0


You don't have to ask of me,
You need not say a word,
Whilst holding you so tenderly
Your thoughts I clearly heard,

The movement of your body's sway,
That look within your eyes,
Which begged my hands, to gently stray,
Between your silk, soft thighs,

I'll take you when, your sweet desire,
is uttered, with a cry,
And take you even higher,
as the hours trickle by.


Because as long as love does live,
Your pleasure is my task,
For I have everything to give,
You'll never need to ask.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pablo Cruise 19 March 2009

Such a sensous poem, delivered with such tenderness. Lovely, Laurie.

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Susan Bagley 19 March 2009

Gulp! Well, Umm, goose bumps, Geez, Laurie why do you do this? ? ? I am about to faint. I didn't need this you know. I am single and have not been on a date in a year.God, what are you up too? Susan

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beautiful poetry. me loves it...... and i agree with Ivor.

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Ivor Hogg 07 August 2009

words are a poor form of communication but you use them well

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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009

Sensual and artistic! Written with passion and excellent creativity. Beautiful! : -)

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Ruth Walters 13 April 2009

Sauce and tenderness.....what a mix: -)))))

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Samweli Butobi 23 March 2009

very goog poem keep writing body language tells something in what to do always.

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