Can I See Through Your Eyes Poem by Laurie hill
Can I See Through Your Eyes
May i borrow your faith, for a little while,
I promise you, I'll keep it safe,
Will you walk with me, just one more mile,
Take pity on this homeless waif,
the hand that you offer is gentle,
the trust that i feel is complete
you speak of a beautiful bethel
Rose petals, all strewn at your feet
Can i see through your eyes, for a little while,
see the heaven your taking me to,
I trust in the warmth of your smile,
And the light, that's surrounding you.
Can i dream of the love, that awaits me,
That you promised will welcome me there,
Will the wings that you spread enfold me
And the weight of my soul will they bear
And i ask, as we soar, will they miss me,
The friends I have left far behind,
Will they know that now i am happy,
with the angels so gentle and kind,
when they borrow your faith for a little while,
when they follow the path that i've trod,
will they too feel the calm that has touched me,
when they sit at the feet of our God.
i don't know what to say Laurie except that it brought me to tears....that's 10 tears and still flowing....
Such a beautiful piece of writing that flowed so well, is as deep as a well too, and shows the faith we have in a wishing well. Your faith shines through this poem.....Karin Anderson
Lovely Laurie, and who has not thought of the day when they may or may not be escorted to the eternal hereafter. A lovely read and reassuring. Susan
beautiful piece, strong but flows so easily. so nicely written.... Rose
Your piece is beautiful and an uplifting one I love these lines of yours below ....................................................... will they too feel the calm that has touched me, when they sit at the feet of our God. ..Laurie, you have drawn me closer and closer to God reading this. What a wonderful write you have here.It is very peaceful to read
This is one of my favorite styles; so rhythmic, so musical..I always get lost in words such as this. Tremendous writing.
This is a beautiful reassuring poem of faith and hope. Thoughts very well expressed and so touching. Thank you for sharing. :)
The calm, tranquility and beauty of these words would turn the head of steadfast atheist. Simply stunning! S :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wonderful write Laurie...such beautiful imagery used here...Fi 10+++