After Death Poem by Konjit Berhane

this one it´s good, i really liked it

Well done. I gave you a 10 to bring your total up. I love the simplicity.

good attempt though some people will find it hard to understand.

I love the first stanza and the first two lines of the second stanza, I think the ending is a little awkward, but I enjoyed the simple charm of all of your poems!

wow! ace i like the simplicity you put into death.

'And it won’t be a theatre stage But a books new first page.' In these lines you have given the idea of the state of after death. Well done.

An interesting and optimistic look at the aftermath of death... well done, Konjit! Brian

this is an awesome and truthful poem.

wow i love this poem, it is so truth.

Love this Konjit, To me it says more about life than it does death. If, as I interperate it, that death is something to be welcomed, then I disagree with the sentiment. However, this does not detract from this being an oustanding piece of work, one which will go into my fave list because I will want to return to it again and again. maybe I will see something new in it. Regards, Denis Joe