Am I? Poem by Konjit Berhane

Am I?

Rating: 3.5


Feeling rage
Want a change
Came here and went there
Wasted my time and energy
Now ‘m feeling lazy
But still I am busy
Looking for the perfect life
But they call me crazy
Am I?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

A nice rhyme, love it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 April 2008

well written..........and good effort

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Herbert Nehrlich1 07 August 2005

Probably not, but your writing style wil only improve if you practice. I wopuld suggest you start with rhyming poems. H

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