I Hate Secrets! ! ! ! Poem by Konjit Berhane

a grand declaration of self and the space self needs to survive but perhaps there are no secrets every face open a fine poem

Hey, great poem, I totally feel the same way about that stuff. Keep up the good work. : -) From Marissa.

Nice poem gal. Do you know some secrets could change your life forever? Scaaaaaay :) . Peace.

Great poem.You painted a nice picture.I liked it. Good flow and deep emotions.Very sweet and touching. You go away from your beloved person but you love more than that. Valentin

wow.! this one beautiful, lovely poem that i can relate to very well. keep up! lov, jojo

i thought this was rather funny. -chuck

Konjit, this is your best poem yet. Congratulations!

I'm not sure it is unique Koni, I'm not sure it's where I stand either! I think there some things I'd rather not know but I guess you can't be that picky if a friend wants to confide in you! Suppose it depends on their motives for telling you! ? Anyway great poem! Moyaxx

Hi, I finally got round to reading this, sorry. And as much as I like the language and the style, I can't say I like the point it makes. It does come across as quite sharp and callous in parts, not very warming at all. I admire it's bluntness to a point, but I like to feel people can tell me their secrets if they're my friend or not. I don't look on it as a bad thing. A unique standpoint you have, I think. Dan x