Captain Cur

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Adventures of Two Captains, Part 9


As we both receive attack,
Captain Cur remembered his old friend, Lord Black

He was the Leader of Ysa Lands,
Great and powerful with generous hands

Once Captain Cur helped him in a war
And he was loyal to our Captain for the Par

As a noble man and a great warrior,
He received our message, so he managed his carrier

The whole army of Ysa was going for a war,
Among their magnificent spaceship named Green Star

IN ASHLANDS:

I was still in the dreams of an unknown place
While out of my mind a terrific war was going on,
That monster was the Queen of that satanic base

Ray of light splashed in the air, I opened my eyes
Captain Cur was fighting while he was defending me,
The red dirty sky of Ashlands broke with the hope's sign

Then the Green Star shined like a moon
Captain pointed at that phenomenon, said:
Ellias, wake! From now this monster is a goon!

Written by Ellias Anderson
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Submitted: Thursday, June 20, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Adventures of Two Captains, Part 9 by Captain Cur )

  • Rookie - 35 Points Doug Bentley (1/29/2014 12:02:00 AM)

    With scientific sorcery you skipper afar, but our boat's beached. we paddle back to shore. o lord of the seven seas, what treasures of wonder beckon you now? we watchmen wait for sight of your proud sails. we watch. we wait. we wait. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 159 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (12/18/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Where are you valor captain....
    our Adventures and all the people here miss you so much.
    your student
    captain A (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (11/11/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    I enjoyed so much Poet an excellent write! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,096 Points Anthony Di''anno (6/29/2013 9:02:00 AM)

    A magnificent read. Congratulations to the both of you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,094 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 10:31:00 PM)

    lovely work with two minds as a one... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (6/23/2013 4:59:00 PM)

    Very nice poem of two Captains. As the
    say goes two heads are better than one.
    Love this write. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (6/23/2013 10:58:00 AM)

    two mind together! excellent i read it with joy... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/22/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    This was a really god read. I enjoyed it so much I read it twice. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (6/21/2013 5:16:00 AM)

    Always loved work from my beloved two, two of you...great work must always to continue again and again...i feel early structure more Ellias but then guided by Captain cur and blend well as a great lovely write_SOul (Report) Reply

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