Captain Cur

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Adventures of Two Captains, Part 9


As we both receive attack,
Captain Cur remembered his old friend, Lord Black

He was the Leader of Ysa Lands,
Great and powerful with generous hands

Once Captain Cur helped him in a war
And he was loyal to our Captain for the Par

As a noble man and a great warrior,
He received our message, so he managed his carrier

The whole army of Ysa was going for a war,
Among their magnificent spaceship named Green Star

IN ASHLANDS:

I was still in the dreams of an unknown place
While out of my mind a terrific war was going on,
That monster was the Queen of that satanic base

Ray of light splashed in the air, I opened my eyes
Captain Cur was fighting while he was defending me,
The red dirty sky of Ashlands broke with the hope's sign

Then the Green Star shined like a moon
Captain pointed at that phenomenon, said:
Ellias, wake! From now this monster is a goon!

Written by Ellias Anderson
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Submitted: Thursday, June 20, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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  • Rookie - 35 Points Doug Bentley (1/29/2014 12:02:00 AM)

    With scientific sorcery you skipper afar, but our boat's beached. we paddle back to shore. o lord of the seven seas, what treasures of wonder beckon you now? we watchmen wait for sight of your proud sails. we watch. we wait. we wait. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (12/18/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Where are you valor captain....
    our Adventures and all the people here miss you so much.
    your student
    captain A (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (6/21/2013 5:16:00 AM)

    Always loved work from my beloved two, two of you...great work must always to continue again and again...i feel early structure more Ellias but then guided by Captain cur and blend well as a great lovely write_SOul (Report) Reply

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