Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Rookie - 327 Points (8.8.1952 / Manakad)

Action And Reaction? - Poem by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

As confluence we gushed
Demolishing either banks
residual deltas
cleave our course forever, but-
In the same Ocean we merge.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Action in life and inevitable reaction

Comments about Action And Reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

  • Gold Star - 24,199 Points Chinedu Dike (2/2/2015 1:54:00 AM)

    The poem reminds me of the meeting point of River Niger and River Benue at Lokoja in Nigeria. It's a nice piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (6/27/2013 2:50:00 AM)

    In flood and inundation there is connection and merging, good concepts considered here. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (6/26/2013 2:46:00 PM)

    We emerge from the ocean and we shall return to the ocean - well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    Action and reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran is a deep poem as far as the meaning is concerned
    Delta that divides the rivers yet they merge in one ocean...Me think what faith you have you have to face death and resurrected.only one is accountable of his/her deeds...this is the deep ocean why we keep commotion...better correct oneself before go go (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    Action and reaction? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran is a deep poem as far as the meaning is concerned
    Delta that divides the rivers yet they merge in one ocean...Me think what faith you have you have to face death and resurrected.only one is accountable of his/her deeds...this is the deep ocean why we keep commotion...better correct oneself before go go (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (6/23/2013 7:28:00 AM)

    Nice poem, well composed! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,696 Points Dave Walker (6/22/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    A great poem, short and sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/22/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    Merging where it all began. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Issa Haikai (6/22/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    very good!
    the beauty i like of
    this truth (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (6/22/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    Cleaving streams finally have to merge with the Ocean! An undeniable truth beautifully stated! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (6/22/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    Versed in beautiful brevity - a great truth! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,595 Points Wahab Abdul (6/21/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    very meaningful poem, it has many insuniation, i like it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013


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