Ability Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Ability

Rating: 2.5


When I step along
in sunlit day,
No one will search of
the light in my eyes.
No wonder!
When they try
to find out,
the light in my eyes
When I sleep alone
in moonlit night.

Thursday, September 15, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: abc
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 24 October 2011

Lol, i'll not delve into analysis here, i need your counsel first.... Short n full of the stuff of mistery.... Very good.....

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Stefanie Fontker 19 September 2011

Short and sweet. I enjoy poetry like this, it touches the heart.

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Yours words made it a rich mans wealth..well done

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Nurain Ali-balogun 15 September 2011

I had to recite the lines several times so they could sink in well. Beautiful is the word I will say.

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Unwritten Soul 15 September 2011

The contrast so well played here and it simply a beautiful poem :) _Unwritten Soul

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