A Rhymed And Metered Children's Poem.... Poem by Bri Edwards

A Rhymed And Metered Children's Poem....

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Gather 'round, Children, and Bri shall tell you a tale...
about a cat which, since birth, had no hair on its tail.
Oh, it HAD a tail, but it was a tail like that on a snake,
and no hair did the cat's tail have, but still it did shake.

Yes, the cat could shake its tail, though it had no hair,
and shake it the cat DID, at which people did STARE.
They thought: 'A cat with a tail that looks like a snake! '
And they thought, 'Look at that cat, for goodness' sake! ! '

The Cat's 'tail' had no hair. It was covered with scales.
Scales cover a snake, & look like tiny human fingernails.
There are lots of scales. They are small, smooth, & shiny.
The cat's were pink, not like the cat's hairs (white) , & tiny.

Imagine having a cat, mostly White, with a shiny PINK tail! ! !
If you had LOTS of money, you'd not find ONE for sale,
.....UNLESS a cat tail's hair was dyed, but still was HAIR.
I think a cat with a snake's tail would, some people, scare!

A cat tail like THAT would also, for some, be a 'puzzle',
like a big blue moustache growing from a dog's muzzle.
Scientists and newspeople would surround them in a whirl,
as would happen if one found horns on head of a squirrel.

WHO owned the Cat? Do you think you can guess? Is it YOU?
Does it belong to a girl, boy, woman, man, or to TWO?
To your parents, an aunt & uncle, to grandparents, so OLD?
Did the cat have NO owner, .....and lived alone, so BOLD!

Would YOU love the cat, pet it, and teach it fo be BRAVE?
Would YOU be its best friend and teach it to BEHAVE? ?
Do YOU think maybe I made up this story in my HEAD? ?
Don't doubt me, but make up YOUR own ending INSTEAD! ! !


(August-September 2023)

bri edwards

;)

Tuesday, August 29, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: cat,snake,children
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My friend, Kim Barney SUGGESTED several topics for poems. This is the result of one suggestion: 'A Rhymed And Metered Children's Poem'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 29 August 2023

Nice try, Bri, but better luck next time. This poem has no meter, but it DOES have RHYME!

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Kingsley Egbukole 01 September 2023

Bri my friend, you have the gift of making good sense from little things with lots of good humour. A beautiful poem worth reading many times.

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Bri Edwards 01 September 2023

[[ CONT. ]] **** 'woe is me interjection Used to show that the speaker feels distress or misery; often used humorously.'

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Bri Edwards 01 September 2023

READERS, MY POEM IS LONGER NOW AND COMPLETE, BUT.................PH IS 'TAKING ITS TIME' OR....SOMETHING ELSE IS KEEPING ME FROM SUCCESSFULLY EDITING THE POEM TO ADD THE REST OF THE STANZAS. 'WOE IS ME! ' ****...AND MAYBE SOME OF YOU? ? ? bri ;) [[ CONT. ]])

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Jim McGill 29 August 2023

Hope it ends well for the cat. My poems about cats never end well—for the cat!

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 August 2023

Nice one. Very interesting. Loved it.

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