A Poem Is Poem by Brian Purdy

A Poem Is

Rating: 4.8


A poem is admission
Of confusion
And being what it is
Excites derision;

Yet those who mock
Will see their words forgotten
While poems alter worlds
And swallow oceans

A poem may be hard
Or it may soften
Such blows as while alive
We meet too often

A poem is a voyage
Of discovery
On which we risk all chance
Of full recovery;

A poem is no display
Of erudition
No learned text that stinks
Of dead tradition

A poem is a brave
And human gesture
Dressed in mage's clothes
But still a jester;

Dispensing with the proverb
And the précis
Prefers its porridge plain
And nothing fancy

On days so blue
They might as well be grey
A poem's what we try
When we can't pray.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bulletcookie 2017 02 May 2012

This is very moving Brian. I do like your lines, ... poems alter worlds And swallow oceans. This country speak is of hallowed ground indeed. Sterling write!

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Smoky Hoss 02 May 2012

Oh yes, I really do like this one. Says so much, and rings so true. Outstanding!

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Valerie Dohren 02 May 2012

Wonderful well expressed exposition of poetry.

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Sara Fielder 03 May 2012

The last line especially grabbed me. Enjoyed reading this!

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Paul Brookes 17 December 2013

Enjoyed reading this so well expressed. A line of a poem may express what a book may take volumes to explore Nice write BB : O))

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Khairul Ahsan 24 November 2013

You have magnificently defined poem from different dimensions, and drawn the conclusion so brilliantly: 'A poem's what we try When we can't pray.' Bravo! Well done!

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Wahab Abdul 20 May 2013

wow good.. you have nice mind to delve deep.. bravo..

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Soulful Heart 27 December 2012

defined in simple words that touch the core.............................

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Adeline Foster 04 May 2012

Found this one intriguing. I too have one similar. Read mine – A Poem is a Lovely Room - Adeline

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