Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

A Mathematical Haiku - Poem by Jahan zaib

I wanted to add you
But you subtracted,
And distances multiplied.


Comments about A Mathematical Haiku by Jahan zaib

  • Gold Star - 31,384 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/2/2014 1:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful, I liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (5/15/2013 1:33:00 PM)

    hahaha! this is so original and clever... i love a bit of wit.... tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (4/15/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    If you vl do the same thing, how can some one, will divide & apart the distance: -) ....hahah hmmmm indeed you are too cunnning writer..: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,206 Points * Sunprincess * (11/24/2012 9:17:00 AM)

    love this one my brilliant friend. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (11/24/2012 5:04:00 AM)

    Oh this maths hurts head
    Count hours thinking of you
    Perfect sums you up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/23/2012 8:13:00 AM)

    some one so brilliant only can think of such thought............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abaka Blessing (11/23/2012 6:31:00 AM)

    Hmmmmmmmmm! very trickish indeed. i spend severed minuite reading it over and over again. a vry nice haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abaka Blessing (11/23/2012 6:31:00 AM)

    Hmmmmmmmmm! very trickish indeed. i spend severed minuite reading it over and over again. a vry nice haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,323 Points Xelam Kan™ (11/21/2012 11:38:00 AM)

    hahahahah thats really tricky.
    nice light touch to your rhymes..........good experience
    haiku is tough task.i wish i could write haiku but in vain.............. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (11/21/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Dont forget to divide all barriers and put in bracket of the power of 3...
    somehow i choose forget all those numbers and mathematical formula
    I am into biology as what left in me is only one, a heart of mine
    even it only one but it has infinity colors of loyalty and loves for everyone who can touch it
    that nobody can calculate it using figures and number except soul_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (11/21/2012 8:36:00 AM)

    beautiful haiku one of the best I 've seen in a long time (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 348 Points Poetheart Morgan (11/21/2012 7:10:00 AM)

    accounts of mathematics, accounts subtracted in love! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 21, 2012


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