Treasure Island

Jahan zaib

(February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

A Mathematical Haiku


I wanted to add you
But you subtracted,
And distances multiplied.

Submitted: Wednesday, November 21, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, November 21, 2012

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  • Farah Ilyas (4/15/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    If you vl do the same thing, how can some one, will divide & apart the distance: -) ....hahah hmmmm indeed you are too cunnning writer..: -) (Report) Reply

  • Abaka Blessing (11/23/2012 6:31:00 AM)

    Hmmmmmmmmm! very trickish indeed. i spend severed minuite reading it over and over again. a vry nice haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Abaka Blessing (11/23/2012 6:31:00 AM)

    Hmmmmmmmmm! very trickish indeed. i spend severed minuite reading it over and over again. a vry nice haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Gulsher John (11/21/2012 11:38:00 AM)

    hahahahah thats really tricky.
    nice light touch to your rhymes..........good experience
    haiku is tough task.i wish i could write haiku but in vain.............. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (11/21/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Dont forget to divide all barriers and put in bracket of the power of 3...
    somehow i choose forget all those numbers and mathematical formula
    I am into biology as what left in me is only one, a heart of mine
    even it only one but it has infinity colors of loyalty and loves for everyone who can touch it
    that nobody can calculate it using figures and number except soul_SOul (Report) Reply

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