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Almedia Knight Oliver


A Loving Partner


We found each other under
evening's orange horizon.
Hearts pulled by moon and
Swept up in the waves of time.
If ever a woman is happy in her man...
I'm she who, delights in calming your needs!

Sweet spring springs pretty flowers.
Solstice winter shares its gloom, yet
our love remain in bloom and its beauty
kept by summer's warm sun

Your words in 'your killing love'
are like flower heads in spring;
temperature slowly rising like morning's sun.
King cobra, I offer you love instead of cream
and commands you rise up close to
my heart, plant a kiss on my lips.
Take my life; death is mine.
you chose this hanging fruit,
blemishs and all my time.
Here! take this ripen berry
that's barely attached to
the vine.

I exhaled toxic air
to inhale pure love.
Bear with me in weakness
that I can stand up to my age.
This fruit is ripened and
falling humbly at your feet!
Dear, bear with me in weakness,
that I can stand up to my age.

Submitted: Friday, March 13, 2009
Edited: Sunday, June 30, 2013

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Sitting in the park, on a gloomy fall evening, pondering this new found love, in the seasoned time of my life, and wondering if it's only for a season....

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  • Rookie - 413 Points Marieta Maglas (6/1/2012 12:56:00 PM)

    This impeccable poem of love, so eloquently written, convinces the reader that love is an eternal feeling coming from God.Blessings.Mari. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 386 Points Saadat Tahir (6/1/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    and i have no choice but to follow my respected colleague....with a resounding yes....! ! !

    ranab k Chakraborty(5/29/2010 7: 36: 00 AM)
    1st blow..........We found each other in the / orange evening horizon
    2nd blow..........Yet our love is in bloom and its / Beauty kept by summer's warmth
    3rd blow...........Your love strikes me like a serpent's; / And send love-venom throughout
    4th blow............Now, take my life... death is mine.
    5th blow............Dear, bear with me in weakness / That I can stand up to my age.

    Heaven is where, don't know, but where heart is so................heaven can't be too far.

    LIVE AND LIVE BEYOND..............

    Regards,
    pranab k chakraborty
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 386 Points Saadat Tahir (6/1/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    You chose this hanging fruit
    blemishs and all my time.
    Here! take this ripen berry
    that's barely attached to
    the vine.

    amazing poem, great imagery, a master craftsman weaving wicker baskets from strings of words.
    to hold Venus's drippings
    loved reading it...its a tenner no doubt.
    sat
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Ahmed Abomahfouz (5/31/2012 6:25:00 PM)

    Oh my God..what a poem! very beautiful. you aroused the readers desire for a loving partner in magic way (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (2/7/2011 5:34:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem! Great imagery with almost perfect style. I am spell bound. What can I say except this that the poem has ruined my comfort.
    Excellent stuff. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (6/7/2010 7:17:00 AM)

    oh miss Almedia that's beautiful! ! why haven't i knew about you? they must make a guide to guide us to great poets!
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,956 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (5/29/2010 7:36:00 AM)

    1st blow..........We found each other in the / orange evening horizon
    2nd blow..........Yet our love is in bloom and its / Beauty kept by summer's warmth
    3rd blow...........Your love strikes me like a serpent's; / And send love-venom throughout
    4th blow............Now, take my life... death is mine.
    5th blow............Dear, bear with me in weakness / That I can stand up to my age.

    Heaven is where, don't know, but where heart is so................heaven can't be too far.

    LIVE AND LIVE BEYOND..............

    Regards,
    pranab k chakraborty
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/24/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    We found each other in the
    orange evening horizon
    Hearts tugged by moon
    and
    Swept up in the wave of time.
    If ever a woman is happy in her man...
    I'm she who delights in calming his needs! .. ya it gives unique joy and feeling and one is prepared to give every thing at his/her command.....10

    read mine love at first sight....i miss (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/9/2010 12:32:00 PM)

    '...Your love strikes me like a serpent's;
    And send love-venom throughout...'

    LoveDeath...by serpent's venom...wow! Snake has some thing to do with Sensuousness...
    indeed ... beautiful...metaphor..
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 78 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (11/23/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    Hold him firmly as the love is very delicate Almeida...........Wonderful poem about the attachment! Many thanks indeed of your lovely comment on my poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Vanita Thakkar (11/9/2009 2:34:00 AM)

    Very natural, very delicate sentiments - one always nurtures within, but hesitates in expressing - out of shyness or out of fear.... Well said.
    Vanita. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 907 Points Ken E Hall (10/14/2009 6:22:00 PM)

    A loving poem indeed which the reader can feel and the last verse
    explains it all which is lovely to read and tells you it is written from the heart
    uavaluvliday
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kesav Easwaran (9/19/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    beautiful sentiments...romance has no age, Almedia...your concluding stanza lines are really touching...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (8/20/2009 1:29:00 PM)

    Hey you can write great screen plays..
    This is like watching a drama, ... I mean like a scene from a drama..
    this is wonderful.. written so passion and love..
    great.. Very enjoyable read..felt your liness...

    with lots of lovess
    Shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven S (8/13/2009 8:46:00 AM)

    Age asks youth to accept it, and not look elsewhere... an interesting request. Bold to say the least. (Report) Reply

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