Almedia Knight Oliver


A Rush of Wild Wind Poem by Almedia Knight Oliver


Love is like a wild wind
Am I just a howling wildness?
or maybe a howling triumph!

Twirling and twisting into a knot
Ought I pull this way or not?
Head spinning, heart running,
and I'm following its path.

Oh sweet heart see the flowers
hanging over the picket fence,
five lovely petals crying
out for-get-me-not!
In the never-ending heaven hangs
as many shinning stars as angels!

Having slept nights alone
Desire crests, overflowing
waves over waves

Sitting alone on the riverbank
Pondering the long dive
Billows beckoning me to ride

Having no buds in waiting
can love bloom at any age?
Growing older against your junior-
wasn't well thought out
years between us are felt,
and distance to be dealt with






Almedia Knight

July 9,2009

Submitted: Wednesday, July 22, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: love hurts


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Love late in life

Comments about this poem (A Rush of Wild Wind by Almedia Knight Oliver )

  • Rookie - 145 Points Claude H Oliver Ii (10/15/2014 12:16:00 PM)

    An emotional tour de force. A roller coaster ride of feelings. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,950 Points Bri Edwards (12/20/2013 3:40:00 PM)

    i'm sure i'm not understanding this as well as Almedia understands it but i guess i come close enough. the winds can be soothing or treacherous; watch out. and watch those waves, but none of us avoid them forever.

    you might wish to look at spelling of one word in this line: as many shinning stars as angels!

    thanks for sharing. will it be a swan dive? :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/12/2010 4:41:00 AM)

    love is like a garden of blossoms where flowers must be taken care of....


    the way you wrote the poem is very good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,190 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/22/2010 1:55:00 AM)

    Love is like a wild wind
    the scent of a spring rose.
    I stopped dead in my track, and
    Waited for it to blow over my head, but..noone knows where from it originates and how itg strikes at heart... lovely placemet of words and only skilled poet can deliver it... nice poem....10

    read mone... at the top.. love ay first sight (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (4/16/2010 7:42:00 AM)

    let your
    Desire capture my heart
    And caress its trembling soul

    this is all that counts - love is not counted in any other currency than love itself and this is ever burgeoning and boundless. Time and dsitance of youth and age are for someone on the outside looking in; not for those captured in love. This is a truly wonderful write, philosophical yes, and image-laden. I've read this over and over and will read it yet again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (4/12/2010 12:13:00 PM)

    wow what a sweet poem is this one..and I really liked it very much..professionally written and quite meaningful..well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/5/2010 1:28:00 PM)

    ‘…Since years between us are felt, /’Its distance can’t be dealt’

    Yeah age matters but Ma’am ‘There is always someone for you’…

    Love Avenue is not a labyrinth better an esplanade…sure I’m…age bar is a butt but with an end…… it just happens …

    No one can make love …love allows it to happen lolol…

    10+ +
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,489 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (3/5/2010 9:14:00 AM)

    The wind of love oh how it refreshes the heart. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ron Flowers (11/26/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    A heart tugging poem, so beautifully written.

    Ron (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven S (8/13/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    Such a lament...
    'Since years between us are felt,
    Its distance can’t be dealt' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (8/3/2009 11:03:00 PM)

    warm feelings written with warm heart. lines and words are beautiful too. thanx for sharing, .
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/2/2009 5:42:00 PM)

    this is not mere poetry, , it is art (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (8/2/2009 5:35:00 PM)

    warm feelings, sad needs and thoughts..touchingly said (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (7/31/2009 3:05:00 AM)

    lovely poem. Tender feelings, beautiful expressions and vivid descriptions. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Claude H Oliver Ii (7/28/2009 8:39:00 PM)

    As usual, love spills out of your writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ LONDON'S BEST LOVE POEMS ~ (7/24/2009 7:15:00 PM)

    A wonderful and tenderly expressed piece Almedia...loving imagery dances and sings around the page giving this piece the perfect setting.....lovely 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (7/24/2009 9:56:00 AM)

    A heartwarming poem you have penned. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (7/23/2009 3:48:00 PM)

    the scene is nice..love relates the beauty of nature.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/23/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    as you grow in years love too matures. at every stage in persons life love is hot and enjoyable. thanx for sharing
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (7/22/2009 8:43:00 PM)

    Since years between us are felt,
    Its distance can’t be dealt

    Its such a sad, heart-dissolving and beautiful poem that I cannot come out
    of its trance for several days, my dear and respected Almedia. I will read
    it again and again until I soak all its sadness.
    Regards

    Naseer (Report) Reply

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