A Glow From Within! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A Glow From Within!

Rating: 4.8


Live the life in a beautiful way
Only one precious life we are gifted with.
Cure the wound before its too deep
Let us take control of its wings
before it is withered by the time.
Let us walk along the bridges we build
Let us keep on building it further and farther
As the years grow fonder and deeper.

Take a deep dive into an ocean
Stay there till not your thirst is quenched.
Breathe it, mingle with its fragrance
Sing and dance along when its thunder and rain
Shed the tears like ocean and
Free it from all the clouds of pain.
Let it be like the Earth washed with heavenly rain
Feel the coolness of breath from within.

Burn it, mould it, anchor it,
Till not it glows from within
Till not it emancipate light from within!

©Geetha Jayakumar 2016. All rights Reserved.

Sunday, February 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2017

A beautiful way.Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

Words of wisdom flowed effortlessly through this poem. The poem itself is a glow and emits light of positivity through each line. Loved the poem entirely and the caption too. 'Only one precious life we are gifted with. Cure the wound before its too deep' - The lines are awakening, readers pause to ponder a while. Congratulations Geetha, on your excellent composition!

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Susan Williams 04 April 2017

You write with such lovely images that seep into our souls and create that glow within! Take a deep dive into it, Drink it till not your thirst is quenched. Breathe it, mingle with its peaceful fragrance. Sing and dance along when it thunders and rains Shed the tears like flood and Free it from all the clouds of pain mounted. Let it be like the Earth washed with heavenly rains To feel the coolness of breath from within.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Absolutely could not be bettered. You nailed this in every way. There is no better writing than this to illustrate your point about living life to the full

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Valsa George 14 March 2017

A beautiful write full of wise thoughts, Geetha! It kindles a luminous glow within! (10)

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Unwritten Soul 08 February 2017

like a pure liquid raindrop, it so precious and rare in the desert....thats how healing it felt when reading this thanks!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 February 2017

You are very true. This life is precious really. This is specially gifted to us. Taking deep dive we can feel this. Heavenly rains wash pain of Earth. This carries wisdom. This poem is really very interesting one shared here with motivational words.10.An excellent poem this is.

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