A Gentle Tale Of Lust Poem by Viola Grey
A Gentle Tale Of Lust
Into the dark, dank cellar
I lead you by the hand
towards a marble alter
laid with crimson sheets,
surrounded by cold candles
winking their naked eyes.
I feel you shiver against me
as I gently lay you down,
enter your mind
and read your soul.
You are not, yet, ready
to embrace this open flame.
The dim light flickers,
you fall into my eyes,
softly you sigh my name.
As your will evaporates
I slowly enter your skin
awaiting that first, sweet thrill.
Hot liquid fire burns my lips,
yet warms my heart.
Uncovering your dreams
in each anxious beat
I see your desire for me,
I hear your pain.
Alas, my love,
alone I choose to wander
as warm, pleading hands
chill my blood.
You grow pale now,
all life slips from your eyes
which seem to beg me
to set you free.
Don't cry, my sweet,
I fail to hear that naked plea
over the steady pleasure beat
you have given me.
11/11/08
* thanks for switching on the light in the think-tank on this one, Captain Jack
Very sensuous! The words floating burning in the air! A 10, definitely!
I stand and bow at this marviless master piece V.
WOW! great read Viola, works the mind so well.10/10 regards Tom
You could give Jilly Cooper and Jackie Collins a run for their money, you saucepot!
I can almost see and feel your progress as you stumbell through your love making process. Like most of us, the best is lost, in the newness of the process and it is only when we return, with the shine gone, to we relealize what we missed, first time around. ROBERT BURNS, PORTLAND, OREGON
dank cellar, marble alter, cold candles, and naked eyes details like that make this a great piece of work. Good job Becca
Entering mind, reading soul, slowly entering skin, and hearing pain—more than amazing ideas. Love this poem … 10+++
This is absolutely the only reason I go to sleep at night...iip
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I would like to translate this poem
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...'Uncovering your dreams in each anxious beat I see your desire for me, I hear your pain. Alas, my love, alone I choose to wander as warm, pleading hands chill my blood'... wonderful poetry, Viola...i really liked this piece...thanks...10